Whole Again
Sometimes forgiveness is not what is sought...or needed12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual 5-7-5, Whole Again, has the right set up and finds that when we are broken down there is a way, a truth, and a life that fixes us forever.....
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This spiritual 5-7-5, Whole Again, has the right set up and finds that when we are broken down there is a way, a truth, and a life that fixes us forever.....
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much, Bill, for stopping by on this one. :) Yvette
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a nice faith poem for the contest.
Sometimes it seems that we have nothing left to offer, but we are always welcomed.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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This is a nice faith poem for the contest.
Sometimes it seems that we have nothing left to offer, but we are always welcomed.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from jenintorre
I really like this very meaningful poem. I think it should do really well, in the competition. I love the title 'whole again'. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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I really like this very meaningful poem. I think it should do really well, in the competition. I love the title 'whole again'. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review -- so appreciated!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this moving piece about the curative power of love for a person who has had really hard times. AWESOME artwork!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this moving piece about the curative power of love for a person who has had really hard times. AWESOME artwork!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review -- so appreciated!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written faith 5-7-5 poem about Jesus who accept us without demanding us to offer anything but our willingness to obey and serve the Lord. He always makes us whole again.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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A very well-written faith 5-7-5 poem about Jesus who accept us without demanding us to offer anything but our willingness to obey and serve the Lord. He always makes us whole again.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review!!
Comment from Gail Denham
I believe we come to God with humility - only way to come I believe. Jesus takes over from there. I know I've discovered over the years, I had nothing to offer him. I want to keep remembering that and just "come".
Good poem to make us think.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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I believe we come to God with humility - only way to come I believe. Jesus takes over from there. I know I've discovered over the years, I had nothing to offer him. I want to keep remembering that and just "come".
Good poem to make us think.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much for your review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine faithful write and so many of us are scared by life and are left with a broken heart and are left with very little to offer and yet we are welcomed, I liked your words here, very touching, this is a good write for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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This is a fine faithful write and so many of us are scared by life and are left with a broken heart and are left with very little to offer and yet we are welcomed, I liked your words here, very touching, this is a good write for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this poem, you put so much sensitivity in this 5-7-5 that I have no words than to repeat:"shards of broken dreams
were all I had to offer...
still, you welcomed me." Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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I love this poem, you put so much sensitivity in this 5-7-5 that I have no words than to repeat:"shards of broken dreams
were all I had to offer...
still, you welcomed me." Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review!!
Comment from Agate Lucas
A beautiful poem about our flaws and broken, incomplete pieces and how our loved ones accept us as we are. You manage to convey an important message in those short lines, good job!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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A beautiful poem about our flaws and broken, incomplete pieces and how our loved ones accept us as we are. You manage to convey an important message in those short lines, good job!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review!!
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is a lovely picture you have chosen to go along with the piece.
To feel welcomed even when you think you have nothing to offer is a feeling not everyone will get to know. Very well done.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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That is a lovely picture you have chosen to go along with the piece.
To feel welcomed even when you think you have nothing to offer is a feeling not everyone will get to know. Very well done.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review this evening....much appreciated.
