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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Lovely free verse Trisha as you take us on a walk, well known, but one that also changed. The second half had me thinking of the 'stairway to heaven' as you beautifully describe the glass, the prisms of light, in this place of healing. Lovely read,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Thanks for a great review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Cheryl I
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Your poem sounds like you found a beautiful place back in nature. It reminds me of a Christian retreat I used to go to up north here in Michigan. Nice job.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Thorn crown Chapel, Eureka Springs, Arkansas, thanks for your positive review
    hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
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A Hallmark card for wedding or anniversary. Very good, Very inspirational.*****************************************************************
Rikki LXVI

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thanks, Rikki as always
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by Rikki66 on 09-Sep-2019
    Welcome.
    Rikki
    LXVI
    Kisses
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thanks again
Comment from Heather Knight
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This is a beautiful poem. So peaceful...
I like the descriptions, they make me feel as if I was there.
The artwork is wonderful too.
Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thanks for your complimentary review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written free verse poem about the beautiful observation you make while you walk along this path. Somethings you have seen before but there are also things you experience for the first time.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thanks for your complimentary review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your free verse club offering, Bucketlist. Your words flow smoothly with great imagery. Your image and color scheme are soothing. I felt as if I was there on the path to the beautiful cathedral as I read your well-chosen words. I have read a second poem by you on this subject. Both are great. Thanks for sharing Jan

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thanks for your complimentary review, Jan
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from JudyE
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This is a very descriptive poem and in my mind's eye I can see the chapel you describe so vividly. I particularly liked the following:

Sanctuary from a troubled world
A respite for emotional healing

Thanks for sharing.
Judy

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thanks for your complimentary review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sugarray77
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What a beautiful description about your journey to the glass chapel. The wonder of all nature contributing as one to the pilgrimage. I enjoyed reading this superb free verse.

Melissa

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thanks for your great complimentary review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written free verse poem you have penned for the Free Verse club event. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Glad you enjoyed the poem. I would image this place would feel even more spiritual because of nature?s scenery. Thanks for your great review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
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This makes me think of the glass chapel here in Arkansas. It rises through the trees, too, with glass throwing prisms about. Lovely free verse and great presentation.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
    Thank you for your complimentary review
    Hugs, Trisha