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a limerick

3 total reviews 
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Always pleased that we use FanArt for our selected artwork to accompany our FS posts. The artwork is really haunting (-:

Do like the premise about the ghost from Vermont. If my memory serves me correctly, there is a haunted bridge story in Vermont. You may be able to search for the same on the Internet.

Best wishes for your entry in the voting.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
    Thanks for the review. I have heard of that bridge. It was a fun write, cheers.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I love Limericks and I enjoyed your bouncy words here, the last line seems to have syllable missing that impeded the impact of the line. Maybe add (and) to the beginning: "and she tired of these nightly taunts". Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
    Thanks for review and advice I agree and changed that and a couple words, it was a fun write, cheers.
Comment from Susan X Smith
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Very clever - I enjoy the Limerick format and this certainly fills the bill. The image you chose to go with the poem complements it very well. Good luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
    Thanks for the insightful review. It was a fun write, cheers.