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The Circle

What comes will be

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is the unfortunate truth of life, we can't wait as an innocent child to become an adult, only to find out that we only have a short life in the scheme of things, I enjoyed your philosophical Haiku, our destiny is set in stone, we all must die, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
    I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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The very subtle metaphor "live to die," this indeed is the complete circle, you are born, and then you have to go... Life is a mystery, and we own just a portion in the middle. Good luck with the contest and with your writing.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
    Thank you for the review.