Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
This is the unfortunate truth of life, we can't wait as an innocent child to become an adult, only to find out that we only have a short life in the scheme of things, I enjoyed your philosophical Haiku, our destiny is set in stone, we all must die, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
Comment from
Iza Deleanu
The very subtle metaphor "live to die," this indeed is the complete circle, you are born, and then you have to go... Life is a mystery, and we own just a portion in the middle. Good luck with the contest and with your writing.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2019
Thank you for the review.