Haiku (waves begin to rise)
Contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a visual thought, it is stated that when the waves of the sea begin to rise as if mesmerized by her (not clear) beauty for there is lunar attraction; well thought if not well said.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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This speaks a visual thought, it is stated that when the waves of the sea begin to rise as if mesmerized by her (not clear) beauty for there is lunar attraction; well thought if not well said.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Cheryl I
I like the photo you chose to complement your words. Your Haiku poem is very nice, about the rising tides brought into being by the moon. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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I like the photo you chose to complement your words. Your Haiku poem is very nice, about the rising tides brought into being by the moon. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun play on words with implications of rising tides and rising passions.... a sensual offering to be sure.. :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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A fun play on words with implications of rising tides and rising passions.... a sensual offering to be sure.. :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 31-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely and beautiful haiku poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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This is a very lovely and beautiful haiku poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you!
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Susan X Smith
Short and sweet as a haiku can be. Lovely picture to complement your poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in your future creative writing.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Short and sweet as a haiku can be. Lovely picture to complement your poem. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in your future creative writing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback!