Devastation
a haiku about fire's destructive force2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is what fire does and we know not what we do here as we are killing our oxygen supply and no one seems to be doing anything about it! A chilling write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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This is what fire does and we know not what we do here as we are killing our oxygen supply and no one seems to be doing anything about it! A chilling write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the review, comments and good luck wish. Coming from you they mean a great deal!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your selected illustration burns through the page as this fire scorches the Brazilian Amazon (possible story line for 2019 in case any FS member does not read the paper or see the news ... LOL)!
You gave us all the elements for this poem. One can sense the heat and the smoke from your verse. The red background complements your text for this 5-7-5 structured verse.
Very nice and timely presentation.
IMHO 'till' should be 'til so no one will complain about tilling the earth spelling.
Best of luck in voting.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Your selected illustration burns through the page as this fire scorches the Brazilian Amazon (possible story line for 2019 in case any FS member does not read the paper or see the news ... LOL)!
You gave us all the elements for this poem. One can sense the heat and the smoke from your verse. The red background complements your text for this 5-7-5 structured verse.
Very nice and timely presentation.
IMHO 'till' should be 'til so no one will complain about tilling the earth spelling.
Best of luck in voting.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the review and comments. Also for catching my error. Hopefully it will teach me to proofread better. Also appreciate the good wishes!