Me and You 40+ years of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "A Colorful Couple!"Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
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Comment from country ranch writer
Color has no weight in comparing love for love is unconditional. Love can withstand so much and many forms of heartbreak. But the tuff keep going working to stay in love.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Color has no weight in comparing love for love is unconditional. Love can withstand so much and many forms of heartbreak. But the tuff keep going working to stay in love.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2019
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Bless and Thank you for the review and positive encouragement.
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hello, nice to see you posting at FS this morning. I enjoyed reading your poem and you certainly meet the criteria for the competition, so best of luck. I did find the capitalization of words distracting. And I suggest you don't do it. I believe only the first word in the sentence requires it unless it is a pronoun, and the poem would be better if that was the case. I also found the last sentence had forced rhyme. But overall, a strong four star poem, and if you change it, let me know and I will change the rating. Eve.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Hello, nice to see you posting at FS this morning. I enjoyed reading your poem and you certainly meet the criteria for the competition, so best of luck. I did find the capitalization of words distracting. And I suggest you don't do it. I believe only the first word in the sentence requires it unless it is a pronoun, and the poem would be better if that was the case. I also found the last sentence had forced rhyme. But overall, a strong four star poem, and if you change it, let me know and I will change the rating. Eve.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the review and time to read and rate. Blessings
Forgot to included the reason for the intentional capitalization.
Always Appreciated.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
They were royal colourful couple, king and queen, if one is blue, other make him normal, so it may be the greatest love in the century; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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They were royal colourful couple, king and queen, if one is blue, other make him normal, so it may be the greatest love in the century; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the Support and Great Review. Blessings to you.