Comment from
Ricky1024
This was Well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues.
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Adjective Content and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
Thank you for you Highly Valued Review, Continued Blessings!
Comment from
dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I tried to read this but you must have black background with black test as there isn't anything to see besides a black box. I'll come back after you fix it, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
Sorry I posted it durning the Midnight change over that always shows those black boxes. It's a fanstory thing I'm guessing. Thank you for the rating Please check back.