Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

How horrible for Handsome Harry (aka HarryT?) to be harassed by this horrendous handicap.
I love your turn of phrase, so descriptive - a very good entry.
Rambunctious is such a cool word!

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019

Thanks much for rational, ravishing review. As for aka maybe, or just creativity...

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Witty wise and wonderful alliterative story that had me smirking, smiling, snickering and guffawing.... Whoever thought up THIS contest must have been crazy-smart....because look who they attracted to write a winner? You! (At least odds are you're the winner!)--(And I'm allowed to say that since I have not a clue who you are!)--Karenina

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019

Thank you so much for the read and review. Very encouraging.

reply by karenina on 28-Aug-2019

Good luck "anonymous"!!!--K

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

A comical post about what used to be a quiet and pleasant ride home from work but now all this cell phone nonsense has taken over. I enjoyed all the adjectives you spilled all over the story.
Patty

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019

Thanks for your read, rating and comment.

reply by Patty Palmer on 27-Aug-2019

You're welcome@