daily prayer for poeta
asking GOD for guidance always18 total reviews
Comment from kiwigirl2821
You know Vance, every time I read your work, I get a feeling that you were put on earth for a definite purpose. You always make sense to me and you keep trying. To me that is the key, that you try no matter what to see beyond the right now and into the unseen or the intent ... Well done you. Happy Holidays. xoxo Kiwi
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You know Vance, every time I read your work, I get a feeling that you were put on earth for a definite purpose. You always make sense to me and you keep trying. To me that is the key, that you try no matter what to see beyond the right now and into the unseen or the intent ... Well done you. Happy Holidays. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
Comment from Adelphos Vasa
Hello, this was very moving and I loved your minimal punctuation. It worked very well and the poem flowed so easily. I especially love this line:
'...the whirling, spinning, misguided minds too full of anger and fear to pay attention with what is rich and near.' I see this so much. Grumbling and bagging-out people they know nothing about and then in the next breath they claim their good people. People of faith. It is very sad though, because all these voices add up and are evil. They don't realize that their ignorant ranting is not harmless. I just wish they would talk about something they know. lol
And the media, once free and democratic, is now so corrupted that it wouldn't know the truth if it bit them on the nose. But people feed of it all day. Like you, I love to live in the moment. I takes practice as the World around us has such an ugly loud voice.
You say this so well, 'to be engaged' ... love it!!
Thank you, Your Grace. (Just this once, let me call you this name as it suits the writer of this poem)
I thoroughly appreciated your writing and I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Hello, this was very moving and I loved your minimal punctuation. It worked very well and the poem flowed so easily. I especially love this line:
'...the whirling, spinning, misguided minds too full of anger and fear to pay attention with what is rich and near.' I see this so much. Grumbling and bagging-out people they know nothing about and then in the next breath they claim their good people. People of faith. It is very sad though, because all these voices add up and are evil. They don't realize that their ignorant ranting is not harmless. I just wish they would talk about something they know. lol
And the media, once free and democratic, is now so corrupted that it wouldn't know the truth if it bit them on the nose. But people feed of it all day. Like you, I love to live in the moment. I takes practice as the World around us has such an ugly loud voice.
You say this so well, 'to be engaged' ... love it!!
Thank you, Your Grace. (Just this once, let me call you this name as it suits the writer of this poem)
I thoroughly appreciated your writing and I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
Comment from Wabigoon
His Grayness -- Lance isn't it?
As the poem does, as language and writing have meaning, so does life, if we believe writing, poetry, art are inherent in the makeup of existence. I don't feel a God is necessary to this, only a sincere ability to read, think, imagine. But thank you, a nice poem.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
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His Grayness -- Lance isn't it?
As the poem does, as language and writing have meaning, so does life, if we believe writing, poetry, art are inherent in the makeup of existence. I don't feel a God is necessary to this, only a sincere ability to read, think, imagine. But thank you, a nice poem.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
Comment from tbacha58
My dearest friend since years. We both lost track of each other, and I just found out that your reason of skipping is my reason to. I will email you a d=medicine the pharmacist proposed I can take it to help me, so it is over the counter and frankly Vance it did help a lot. I don't want to describe more just try to find out if you can take it. Much love and my thoughts will always be with you. Terry xoxoxo
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My dearest friend since years. We both lost track of each other, and I just found out that your reason of skipping is my reason to. I will email you a d=medicine the pharmacist proposed I can take it to help me, so it is over the counter and frankly Vance it did help a lot. I don't want to describe more just try to find out if you can take it. Much love and my thoughts will always be with you. Terry xoxoxo
Comment Written 08-Dec-2019
Comment from Joan E.
Hopefully, you are also Vance Seagle! I admired your prose poem to reach out for guidance. I hope after "crawling into years" your prayers are answered. Best wishes- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Hopefully, you are also Vance Seagle! I admired your prose poem to reach out for guidance. I hope after "crawling into years" your prayers are answered. Best wishes- Joan
Comment Written 18-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much, so sincerely- Joan, for your lovely review and generous stars, so very much appreciated indeed! His Grayness; VANCE
Comment from papa55mike
We have to ask God guidance, or we'll flounder around to eventually miss His calling. This is a well-written poem with a great message. Keep them coming. It's good to hear from you.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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We have to ask God guidance, or we'll flounder around to eventually miss His calling. This is a well-written poem with a great message. Keep them coming. It's good to hear from you.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Vance. A fine prayer for understanding and particularly for all of us to understand and be tolerant of each other. There is a tiny typo here:
"as I still wonders (wonder) what i" Marilyn
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Hi Vance. A fine prayer for understanding and particularly for all of us to understand and be tolerant of each other. There is a tiny typo here:
"as I still wonders (wonder) what i" Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
Comment from judiverse
Whirling, spinning, misguided minds--excellent phrase. It is a shame we're so filled with anger and fear that we ignore the positive. This a prayer for understanding and loving. It shows your desire to be engaged with others--understanding, knowing, and loving. I hope you will take Rama Devi's about aligning your poem to show off its wonderful content to best advantage. judi
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Whirling, spinning, misguided minds--excellent phrase. It is a shame we're so filled with anger and fear that we ignore the positive. This a prayer for understanding and loving. It shows your desire to be engaged with others--understanding, knowing, and loving. I hope you will take Rama Devi's about aligning your poem to show off its wonderful content to best advantage. judi
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
Comment from Ricky1024
This wss well written rich in theme and imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues as well.
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Adjective Content and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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This wss well written rich in theme and imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues as well.
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Adjective Content and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt prayer/poem in humbleness we can only pray that God will lead and guide us to keep writing our poems and prayers for others to enjoy.
Typo in title
daily prayer for poeta(poets)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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A very well-written heartfelt prayer/poem in humbleness we can only pray that God will lead and guide us to keep writing our poems and prayers for others to enjoy.
Typo in title
daily prayer for poeta(poets)
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thanks so much Sandra, for your lovely review and generous stars and also the notice on the spag as poeta instead of poets! sometimes the fingers go faster than the mind!! s thanks so much! Vance