Cocktail Hour
A 5-7-5 Entry12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Cocktail Hour, has the right set up and brings the heat and cooling together for that shot of the best of both extremes. Nice.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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This 5-7-5, Cocktail Hour, has the right set up and brings the heat and cooling together for that shot of the best of both extremes. Nice.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from Sallyo
How clever! It reminds me of pink and blue liquids being stirred together... as happens at sunset. That's a beguiling use of the prompt. Best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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How clever! It reminds me of pink and blue liquids being stirred together... as happens at sunset. That's a beguiling use of the prompt. Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 28-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. That's a nice quiet: viewing the magnificent colors at the end of the day. It highlights the beautiful picture you have included. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Hello mystery writer. That's a nice quiet: viewing the magnificent colors at the end of the day. It highlights the beautiful picture you have included. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely piece.
The rhyming is an appealing enhancement, and the cocktail metaphor
helps paint a sweet image.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely piece.
The rhyming is an appealing enhancement, and the cocktail metaphor
helps paint a sweet image.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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So glad you liked this piece. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me think of cocktails to drink at sunset, this 5-7-5 has an atmospheric feel sweet delight, I wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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This made me think of cocktails to drink at sunset, this 5-7-5 has an atmospheric feel sweet delight, I wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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So glad you liked this piece. Thanks for reading and review
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a wonderful offering for this contest -- love that you added that 'spice' of rhyme throughout!! ;) Thank you so very much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Such a wonderful offering for this contest -- love that you added that 'spice' of rhyme throughout!! ;) Thank you so very much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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So glad you liked this piece. Thanks for reading and review
Comment from kahpot
What an excellent 5-7-5 poem, your words have panted a beautiful picture equal to your chosen artwork, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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What an excellent 5-7-5 poem, your words have panted a beautiful picture equal to your chosen artwork, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for your encouraging comments!
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like your warmth and coolness blend. That goes nicely with your image and leads into your cocktail reference. I think that I would change the title though. I can barely see the ship. I would just make the title about the sunset colors or the cocktails.
Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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I like your warmth and coolness blend. That goes nicely with your image and leads into your cocktail reference. I think that I would change the title though. I can barely see the ship. I would just make the title about the sunset colors or the cocktails.
Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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I actually had a different title in mind and then spotted the boat. I agree with you and have changed it back to my original tithe. Thanks for sharing your insights!
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I like that title better.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Pretty illustration choice! I see the end rhymes with the "ight" sound. I think there is some alliteration of "c" with "coolness" and "cocktail" with just two words in-between. I think nature is prettier than alcohol ever could be, and this poem suggests so also.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Pretty illustration choice! I see the end rhymes with the "ight" sound. I think there is some alliteration of "c" with "coolness" and "cocktail" with just two words in-between. I think nature is prettier than alcohol ever could be, and this poem suggests so also.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this piece!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The picture you choose it's"a cocktail of delights." Reading this poem, I am getting into a beautiful dream at the shore of a sea. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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The picture you choose it's"a cocktail of delights." Reading this poem, I am getting into a beautiful dream at the shore of a sea. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your encouraging feedback!
