Old Neighborhood
Took my daughter to the neighborhood where I grew up12 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
The times are a changin' !
I recall visiting my grammar school as an adult. I was shocked to see that the auditorium was so much smaller from my adult eyes' vision. One's perspective is changed in time and experience. And what was your daughter's' reaction to you with this visit? LOL
Good luck for your entry.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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The times are a changin' !
I recall visiting my grammar school as an adult. I was shocked to see that the auditorium was so much smaller from my adult eyes' vision. One's perspective is changed in time and experience. And what was your daughter's' reaction to you with this visit? LOL
Good luck for your entry.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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She was surprised that the neighborhood look so run-down. She said it looked sad. I told her of the good times and friends. It made her feel a bit better. Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. The content is relevant as you can never go back - social erosion eventually eats away at everything. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count. The content is relevant as you can never go back - social erosion eventually eats away at everything. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
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Unfortunately, what you say is all too true. Thanks for your read and review.
