Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose for your poem, I felted the same way when my little four legged friend run around the corner or into some ones yard . That little creature took life out of me and return it in ten minutes
thank you for sharing
cookie

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019

Hi Miss Cookie...I am always inspired by your freedom in expressing what you are feeling. Thank you for sharing with me and for the kind review. - Carol

reply by misscookie on 26-Aug-2019

Your very welcome, I'm just being me!
take care.
Cookie

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Few things scarier than losing a pet. This is a sad story with a very happy ending. So glad her little stalker showed up. This is well done, I saw no errors and wish you well in the contest. Rox

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019

Thank you...I would be lost without the love of my little ones and I am glad that you too appreciated the emotions they stir in our hearts. Thank you for the kind review. - Carol

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I like your dribble flash fiction and the twist at the end. At first I didn't know who or what was crying under the tree, the dog or the owner. Well written and full of imagery.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019

Having to pack so much emotion into so few words is a difficult task for me but I appreciate your kind review. Have a great day! - Carol

Comment from Cheryl I

Excellent

Awww...I'm glad she found her little dog. I do not have pets right now, but my friend lost hers to illness and she is a basket case. Dogs can truly be man's (and woman's) best friends. Nice job on your poem.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019

My little fur babies are helping me begin the next chapter of my life and I would be devastated without them. Thank you for enjoying and for the kind review. - Carol

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork for
your story; your
note is appreciated, too.
-The description in the
opening paragraph is very good.
-It sets the scene well.
-I like how you use "ball of fur"
barking instead of coming
out and telling instead.
-A very good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019

Thank you so much....My little fur ball is Snickers and I too would be devastated if he was missing. I appreciate your kind words. Thank you!

reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Aug-2019

You are very welcome. What a cute name, but I would always be thinking of the candy bar! I noticed you have been away from FS for a while. Welcome back.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I have a little fur baby, Harley, who happens to follow me into the bathroom. I have often wondered what the attraction is. LOL Anyway, I enjoyed reading your contest entry and am betting you do really well, but just in case, good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019

Thank you so much...My little guy is called Snickers and I would truly be lost without his playful kisses and constant companionship.