Tip the bucket
A poem3 total reviews
Comment from shaffer40
I think this is a well-put-together poem that tells an important, poignant story of almost being there. It makes a strong point about the destructiveness of drugs. I think you'll do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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I think this is a well-put-together poem that tells an important, poignant story of almost being there. It makes a strong point about the destructiveness of drugs. I think you'll do well in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019
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Thanks for the review and encouragement. Yes, it is sad the way life turns out for some. Our circus, our monkeys....cheers.
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You're welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
Oh my - this has got a sting in the tale! You brought me down to earth with a thud of modern realism.... I was coasting along on the bucket list warm fuzzies. Very well done.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Oh my - this has got a sting in the tale! You brought me down to earth with a thud of modern realism.... I was coasting along on the bucket list warm fuzzies. Very well done.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Like life, ha ha. Not one puts heroin addict on their life list, but it sometimes happens, shame. Cheers.
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it's a terrible shame.
Comment from Cheryl I
I think you did an excellent job on this poem. I hated to see the ending, but it is true to life, thank you Vietnam. No one ever wishes to grow up to be a heroin addict. Very nice job. Cheryl
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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I think you did an excellent job on this poem. I hated to see the ending, but it is true to life, thank you Vietnam. No one ever wishes to grow up to be a heroin addict. Very nice job. Cheryl
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the review and sparkly stars Cheryl. Yeah, it is always a great shame for someone to lose everything to heroin, sigh. Cheers.
