Will You Show Me The Way?
Seeking and finding my best friend.9 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written uplifting poem. We sometimes think we know better and try to walk our own path, often we find we are totally lostrich and start seeking again the Madter's guidance.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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A very well-written uplifting poem. We sometimes think we know better and try to walk our own path, often we find we are totally lostrich and start seeking again the Madter's guidance.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I guess in life, we can have friends, some are good friends, and some are best friends. I've had a few here and there, but I know of only one friend that sticks closer than a brother. A friend like that will leave you markers and signs as to find your way back to them. I like the message of this beautifully written offering. Thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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I guess in life, we can have friends, some are good friends, and some are best friends. I've had a few here and there, but I know of only one friend that sticks closer than a brother. A friend like that will leave you markers and signs as to find your way back to them. I like the message of this beautifully written offering. Thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review. It's nice to think you have a solid friendship through thick and thin. Sometimes that one friend is Our Lord.
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this verse of hope, reconciliation and restitution for this relationship ( a lot of r words... lol). Great job on this uplifting poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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I love this verse of hope, reconciliation and restitution for this relationship ( a lot of r words... lol). Great job on this uplifting poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your rousing review!
Comment from tfawcus
A powerful description of regret at a wrong move taken, yearning for a second chance, and in this uplifting tale, a second chance given. A heart-warming entry to the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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A powerful description of regret at a wrong move taken, yearning for a second chance, and in this uplifting tale, a second chance given. A heart-warming entry to the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks for this lovely review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
The message here is a poignant one. The writer realizes she missed a valuable opportunity, because she didn't appreciate a potential friend or romantic partner. This is something that's easy to relate to.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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The message here is a poignant one. The writer realizes she missed a valuable opportunity, because she didn't appreciate a potential friend or romantic partner. This is something that's easy to relate to.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your comments, Susan. I'm glad you found it relatable.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a lovely poem. Sometimes we fail to see how someone is truly important to our lives. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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This is a lovely poem. Sometimes we fail to see how someone is truly important to our lives. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your lovely review, Debbie!
Comment from kahpot
To ask forgiveness one of the hardest thing man needs to overcome, once brave enough to do so life becomes honesty, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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To ask forgiveness one of the hardest thing man needs to overcome, once brave enough to do so life becomes honesty, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks for this nice review! I think most people choke on forgiveness, but you are right... it does lead to honesty of emotion.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A relationship is built on the ups and downs and the mutual understanding we have for each other and your journey sounds like you found a connection, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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A relationship is built on the ups and downs and the mutual understanding we have for each other and your journey sounds like you found a connection, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks for this review, Dolly. If there is forgiveness and a willingness to accept, then I think we should be allowed a second chance.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Friends meet like and then disappointed disappeared. Then one day the realization thumps timidly at your door remind you "with the hand reaches out of the dark and puts you back on the track. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Friends meet like and then disappointed disappeared. Then one day the realization thumps timidly at your door remind you "with the hand reaches out of the dark and puts you back on the track. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review, Iza. I'm glad the person in my poem had a second chance.
