Oh, good Grief -Version 1
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Near death and resurrection, Pt1"A complete look at grief and grief support.
4 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
"God your will; not mine, not the devil's." Often times we try to break the circle of misery and bad habits, and the only time we succeed is when God sends us somebody that we trust and that has the power to restart, reignite the old engine called conscience. In your case, the guardian angel is Jean. Thanks for sharing:)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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"God your will; not mine, not the devil's." Often times we try to break the circle of misery and bad habits, and the only time we succeed is when God sends us somebody that we trust and that has the power to restart, reignite the old engine called conscience. In your case, the guardian angel is Jean. Thanks for sharing:)
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Wow! I thank you very much for your review. I believe that she is because there have been other occurrences she has appeared.
Comment from PteGIJane
You have documented an interesting life journey before removing alcohol from your life. I truly believe in people entering our lives in a spiritual way to direct us when we need it. I don't mean it in a religious way. People who passed before us often enter our dreams. I am glad that you got a different perspective and turned your life around. It could not have been easy. Stay strong in your convictions.
In respect to your written story, I would proof read it again as there are a few spelling and grammar errors.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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You have documented an interesting life journey before removing alcohol from your life. I truly believe in people entering our lives in a spiritual way to direct us when we need it. I don't mean it in a religious way. People who passed before us often enter our dreams. I am glad that you got a different perspective and turned your life around. It could not have been easy. Stay strong in your convictions.
In respect to your written story, I would proof read it again as there are a few spelling and grammar errors.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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Unfortunately because the amount of work that I had to do, had a deadline to deal with. I will eventually get things corrected. I thank you for your review.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is well written and jam packed with all kinds of information some pertinent and some not :). The section on the zealous preaching of certain 'born again' was particularly interesting to me and I have to agree with you - it really can be expanded beyond that group as ALL religious groups have their fair share of individuals who do God more harm than good with their judgmental and short-sighted thinking. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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This is well written and jam packed with all kinds of information some pertinent and some not :). The section on the zealous preaching of certain 'born again' was particularly interesting to me and I have to agree with you - it really can be expanded beyond that group as ALL religious groups have their fair share of individuals who do God more harm than good with their judgmental and short-sighted thinking. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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I thank you for your review, and sharing with me what you like as well a nice point.
The difficulty with this type of work your are relaying not only the experience, but things that figure into the experience, as well how the experience affects you. I try to make the elements of the story as complete as possible and I discovered a psychology takes place and that the readers have a variety of things that would interest them and generally skim over the details that don't.
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I have experienced more than one NDE and my clarity was increased. IF you are writing to an audience, you will fail. You must write the experience directly from the heart. These reviews are worth nothing - if you want to know the truth - send this off to a publisher as they don't mess around when it comes to whether writing is read worthy or simply argle-bargle.
Comment from Ricky1024
Near death and Resurrection was well-written rich in theme and imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Near death and Resurrection was well-written rich in theme and imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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I thank you very much for your review.
