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9 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a technically sound Cinquain Poem. The content is light and uplifting in its imagery. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a technically sound Cinquain Poem. The content is light and uplifting in its imagery. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
And shame on us if we let others change our dreams, yeah?! ;) :) This is an excellent offering for the contest, Trisha -- can't think of a more important message for life! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette ;)
P.S. Still playing catch-up.... promise to get there one day - LOL! ;)
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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And shame on us if we let others change our dreams, yeah?! ;) :) This is an excellent offering for the contest, Trisha -- can't think of a more important message for life! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette ;)
P.S. Still playing catch-up.... promise to get there one day - LOL! ;)
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Your reviews are aways good to go, late or not!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Cinquain about our dreams that sometimes reveal our deepest secrets that even we don't know in our conscious mind but only when we are not aware our unconscious mind come to us in our sleep.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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A very well-written Cinquain about our dreams that sometimes reveal our deepest secrets that even we don't know in our conscious mind but only when we are not aware our unconscious mind come to us in our sleep.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from pome lover
interesting concept.
I hadn't really thought of it that way.
I am interpreting that to mean aspirations?
(Some of my dreams are weird and strange.)
Your poem is lovely and food for thought.
pome lover
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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interesting concept.
I hadn't really thought of it that way.
I am interpreting that to mean aspirations?
(Some of my dreams are weird and strange.)
Your poem is lovely and food for thought.
pome lover
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Dreams help us find direction in our lives, I think. They?re private so we can decide what we get from them, without others decisions.
Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a great short short in the form of a cinquain. I like the way it makes coherent sense. I like the art choice. I was kind of curious as to why the first line wasn't capitalized, but "If others don't try to change our" was capitalized. I think I would have capitalized "Our" in the first line and un-capitalized "If" in line 4. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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This is a great short short in the form of a cinquain. I like the way it makes coherent sense. I like the art choice. I was kind of curious as to why the first line wasn't capitalized, but "If others don't try to change our" was capitalized. I think I would have capitalized "Our" in the first line and un-capitalized "If" in line 4. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review and suggestions
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Janetsue
Dreams are our private property that nobody else even needs to be aware of. We must cherish them and avail ourselves of every opportunity to move them forward. This is a super entry in the contest...best wishes!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Dreams are our private property that nobody else even needs to be aware of. We must cherish them and avail ourselves of every opportunity to move them forward. This is a super entry in the contest...best wishes!
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
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You're truly welcome, Trisha!
Comment from Cheryl I
It is amazing how others presume to know more than we do about what is good for us. Of course, it is for our own good, we are told. I think, though, it is merely jealousy that we would dare to follow our dreams. Nice job on this! Cheryl
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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It is amazing how others presume to know more than we do about what is good for us. Of course, it is for our own good, we are told. I think, though, it is merely jealousy that we would dare to follow our dreams. Nice job on this! Cheryl
Comment Written 25-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your great review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Mark D. R.
Do like how your illustration and verse are matched in a beautiful purple hue.
Punctuation and capitalization are in the pen of the poet. But IMHO your entry is a bit inconsistent since 'of ' and 'choices' are lowercase. For your nice presentation, consider all lowercase to start each line. Sometimes a change in our choices makes sense (-;
Best wishes in contest voting.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Do like how your illustration and verse are matched in a beautiful purple hue.
Punctuation and capitalization are in the pen of the poet. But IMHO your entry is a bit inconsistent since 'of ' and 'choices' are lowercase. For your nice presentation, consider all lowercase to start each line. Sometimes a change in our choices makes sense (-;
Best wishes in contest voting.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Mark for your suggestions and review, hugs, Trisha
Comment from kahpot
Well I don't think I have ever heard more honest and true words, you have put this excellently, Dreams are part of us and who we are and if we stand firm we will achieve very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Well I don't think I have ever heard more honest and true words, you have put this excellently, Dreams are part of us and who we are and if we stand firm we will achieve very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2019
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Wow, kahpot! I?m honored by your rating, and and review. Thank you,
Hugs, Trisha