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The Moon's Embrace

Sedoka Poem Contest Entry

4 total reviews 
Comment from Sally Law
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That's it, into my fan base you go. I thought I had already fanned you but I keep missed these. Such is my blind plight. Congratulations on your contest win dear poet.
Sal xo

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 26-Aug-2019
    Thank you for the great review and congrats, Sal. Most of the things I write goes into 'Blind' contests. When I join blind contests the site doesn't send a private message to your fans. That's why a lot of the things I write slip through the cracks. I'm glad you liked the piece, S. Have a great day.

    Ron
Comment from Six-Star Writer
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I suppose this is a weak attempt at conveying repressed homosexual tendencies.

Cliches:

-"Nightfall closes in"

-"moon's embrace"

-"tears fill my eyes"

Keep trying. Coming up with something original is hard work.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
    Fuck you. For your sorry ass it's hard work to come up with something original that even makes sense. Let alone the shit I see you posting. Hahaha
reply by Six-Star Writer on 22-Aug-2019
    Don't worry. You can come out of the closet now, faggot. You terrible writer piece of shit. You sure have a lot of time on your hands, Dragon shit. I guess being a parasite of the state is good for you. Too bad you can't write, you evil waste of space.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
    Yeah, your ex sure didn't think I was a faggot. She surely knew better. Too bad she left you but who could blame her. Look at the pile of shit she made the mistake of marrying. Hahahs
reply by Six-Star Writer on 22-Aug-2019
    Don't worry. You can be a faggot in public nowadays, clock breath. And, you can even be a writer. A faggot, on-the-dole, low-life, scumbag pissant writer.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
    Hahaha. Yeah, a whole lot better writer that you'll ever be. Hahahahahaha.
reply by Six-Star Writer on 22-Aug-2019
    In your dreams, sack of dragon shit. You're not even in the same ballpark, Cliche king.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
    Yeah, you're right, I didn't have to pay thousands and thousands of dollars for schooling just to learn to write worthless crap like some people did. Hahahaha.
reply by Six-Star Writer on 22-Aug-2019
    I know. You prove your incredible lack of education daily. I'd be surprised if you graduated high school, flunky, wannabe writer. But even if you did obtain some sort of credential, I'm sure you'd still be a bad writer, human excrement.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
    Hahaha. You should be a circus clown, you're hilarious. Oh wait, everyone on here already sees you as a clown. Hahaha
reply by Six-Star Writer on 22-Aug-2019
    I think you should be a clown, then you could stop stealing money from tax payers, worthless cocksucker. And no, only losers like who who can't write and can't take constructive criticism don't want to read my superior writing, anal, gum repository.
Comment from Agate Lucas
Excellent
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I may be a little biased here, because I love everything related to shape shifting and fantasy elements (including werewolves) but I really loved your poem! You keep the suspense until the last line, and build tension little by little. Great job!

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Agate. Yeah, I love it all as well. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
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Moon's embrace is the fruition, as the poet visualizes, of the curse of the wolf, in course of savage transition, at the night fall, tears fill the eyes of the poet; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
    Thank you for the generous stars and great review, Dr. Al. I'm glad you liked the piece.