The Lady and the Koi
A Matter of Perspective - A Sedoka Contest Offering12 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer who should be writing lesson plans or heading for bed!
How I loved your Sedoka!
Laughed aloud...especially when I think of the critters in my pond and imagined what they must think when this "Lurking lady looms!" And I am certain they all wish I would go...But........ I'm back! And I don't intend to go away anytime soon!
Thank you for the smile this evening!
diane
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer who should be writing lesson plans or heading for bed!
How I loved your Sedoka!
Laughed aloud...especially when I think of the critters in my pond and imagined what they must think when this "Lurking lady looms!" And I am certain they all wish I would go...But........ I'm back! And I don't intend to go away anytime soon!
Thank you for the smile this evening!
diane
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Yes, ma'am -- and this was my 'front porch break' just a few minutes ago.... the cicadas and owls were serenading me!! ;) :) Good to see your shining face, Beautiful Lady, as I have missed you -- hope you are well!!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This poem displays fish.....is the big orange one the lurking lady? Even fish won't put there differences aside.....probably if they would they would experience peace.
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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This poem displays fish.....is the big orange one the lurking lady? Even fish won't put there differences aside.....probably if they would they would experience peace.
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Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review!
