The Lady and the Koi
A Matter of Perspective - A Sedoka Contest Offering12 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
And, a fine offering this is. When I'm out of town, I have a tendency to miss a few things, so possibly I missed this one as well. This was fun and fresh from your creative mind. Always beautifully done and colorfully illustrated, Yvette.
Sending my best today as well,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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And, a fine offering this is. When I'm out of town, I have a tendency to miss a few things, so possibly I missed this one as well. This was fun and fresh from your creative mind. Always beautifully done and colorfully illustrated, Yvette.
Sending my best today as well,
Sally xo
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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In the closet again, I see - glad you're enjoying!! ;) You're so awesome to do that, Lady Sal -- I do so very much appreciate all your extra time... I owe ya, my lady!! ;) :) Take care of you and Jackson! ;) Yvette
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Always welcome, my friend. ;+))
Comment from June Sargent
Absolutely stunning imagery! I loved the sulking koi's complaint of her blocking the sunlight. We forget we're not the only ones on this planet. Great artwork as well.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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Absolutely stunning imagery! I loved the sulking koi's complaint of her blocking the sunlight. We forget we're not the only ones on this planet. Great artwork as well.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my silly little fish and lady for the contest, June -- this one was another of me just kinda foolin' around, but those can sometimes produce the best results, ya know?! ;) Take care! :) Yvette
Comment from Mia Twysted
I'm sure the fish are very tired of being looked at. I know when I am in our swimming pool that I often feel like people just stand there and watch you swim around like they have nothing better to do. I wonder if it looks the same for the wish.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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I'm sure the fish are very tired of being looked at. I know when I am in our swimming pool that I often feel like people just stand there and watch you swim around like they have nothing better to do. I wonder if it looks the same for the wish.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Sedoka the koi'so wants to see the sun from their dark pond while the lady wants to look at the colorful koi and blocking the sun from reaching the bond.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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A very well-written Sedoka the koi'so wants to see the sun from their dark pond while the lady wants to look at the colorful koi and blocking the sun from reaching the bond.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is cute and I loved your presentation. Also enjoyed the alliteration in 'lurking lady looms.' Now, can fish tell the difference between a cloud and a human blocking the sun, I wonder. Do they even think about it, haha. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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This is cute and I loved your presentation. Also enjoyed the alliteration in 'lurking lady looms.' Now, can fish tell the difference between a cloud and a human blocking the sun, I wonder. Do they even think about it, haha. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your sedoka is very well-written, creative, and appealing--giving the thoughts of woman and fish. What ARE creatures thinking? Do they get tired of us gawking at them!?
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Your sedoka is very well-written, creative, and appealing--giving the thoughts of woman and fish. What ARE creatures thinking? Do they get tired of us gawking at them!?
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Cheryl I
Hahaha! I love your poem. I laughed out loud when I got to the last sentence. You certainly did have different perspectives in your stanzas. A delightful little poem that gave me my smile for the day - thank you!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Hahaha! I love your poem. I laughed out loud when I got to the last sentence. You certainly did have different perspectives in your stanzas. A delightful little poem that gave me my smile for the day - thank you!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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You're quite welcome. Thank you for your review!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The koi is a fascinating fish, quiet and beautiful. The playfulness is interrupted by a lady who leaves her shadow to cover his existence. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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The koi is a fascinating fish, quiet and beautiful. The playfulness is interrupted by a lady who leaves her shadow to cover his existence. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautifully peaceful and tranquil write and I wish you luck with the contest, a form that I have never tried before, your brought an atmospheric peace here, lvoe Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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A beautifully peaceful and tranquil write and I wish you luck with the contest, a form that I have never tried before, your brought an atmospheric peace here, lvoe Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from DonandVicki
Yes indeed, peace is relative. The lady think that the Koi are at peace, while she feels troubled and the Koi wishes that she would go away. In other words she is the problem. Well done.
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Yes indeed, peace is relative. The lady think that the Koi are at peace, while she feels troubled and the Koi wishes that she would go away. In other words she is the problem. Well done.
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Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review!
