Deja Vu
Thought Provoking 5-7-5 contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, your poem is indeed very thought provoking. Great job! Not only did you execute the 5-7-5 well but you made the reader think, what more could you ask for?
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Hello fellow poet, your poem is indeed very thought provoking. Great job! Not only did you execute the 5-7-5 well but you made the reader think, what more could you ask for?
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, 13. I'm glad you liked this little piece.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The state of feeling like déjà vu is an impression of having seen or experienced something before so we feel coincidence; truly related and expressed; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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The state of feeling like déjà vu is an impression of having seen or experienced something before so we feel coincidence; truly related and expressed; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Dr. Al. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about Deja Vu that often happens when we feel we were there before but we have no proof of being there before and we do not know for sure if it is real or our imagination.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about Deja Vu that often happens when we feel we were there before but we have no proof of being there before and we do not know for sure if it is real or our imagination.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the gracious stars and great review, Sandra. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Janilou
Is our déjà vu
coincidence or have we
lived this life before?
Oh, I do believe we have. Which is a realization I have come to over the years. Thank you for the thought provoking words. It's a well-written poem.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Is our déjà vu
coincidence or have we
lived this life before?
Oh, I do believe we have. Which is a realization I have come to over the years. Thank you for the thought provoking words. It's a well-written poem.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Jan. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You did such a good job creating your picture.....yep, as they say what goes around comes around. I often wonder, why the repeat? Is there anything that's worth repeating? God only knows.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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You did such a good job creating your picture.....yep, as they say what goes around comes around. I often wonder, why the repeat? Is there anything that's worth repeating? God only knows.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Yes, He's the only one who does. Lol. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Rosemary. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Mark D. R.
I always wonder about that possibility. But reality sets in when I see my reflection: I know that guy!
Your writing prompt entry does present an excellent presentation. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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I always wonder about that possibility. But reality sets in when I see my reflection: I know that guy!
Your writing prompt entry does present an excellent presentation. Best of luck.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Mark. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Cheryl I
Oooh, I like your question. I have wondered the same thing, before. I think you did a fine job on this, and the graphic fits nicely. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Oooh, I like your question. I have wondered the same thing, before. I think you did a fine job on this, and the graphic fits nicely. Good luck in the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Cheryl. It actually took longer to create the pic than it did to come up with the words, lol. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
