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Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Let the Music Begin?"A Book of Horror and Honor.
7 total reviews
Comment from A. Willow Bends
This is quite unusual and I have not read the whole thing, but you seem to be putting together something quite creative. I wanted to point out one little error. I think you meant to say "carve" many wonderful things. It says "car". Just a little thing. spell check probably didn't notice it
I will watch for the continuation.
Great job!
It is very eye-catching.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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This is quite unusual and I have not read the whole thing, but you seem to be putting together something quite creative. I wanted to point out one little error. I think you meant to say "carve" many wonderful things. It says "car". Just a little thing. spell check probably didn't notice it
I will watch for the continuation.
Great job!
It is very eye-catching.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2019
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it took me two hours but I piece the entire beginning the middle with Destiny's playing in the final conclusion let the music begin and thanks.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an interesting poem about destiny personified as a woman. The time period is decades in the past. It gave me something to think about. Good luck in your continued poetry writing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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This is an interesting poem about destiny personified as a woman. The time period is decades in the past. It gave me something to think about. Good luck in your continued poetry writing.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Conclusion to this will be happening on the 25th and since you're following along.
I'll give you a clue!
Her powers that she starts to utilize and that boy with the melting face!
Which of course is her doll?
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We may have regrets in life about many things and our best course of action is to put the past behind us and pick out the best memories to soothe us, this is easier said than done but worth the effort, best wishes to you Ricky, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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We may have regrets in life about many things and our best course of action is to put the past behind us and pick out the best memories to soothe us, this is easier said than done but worth the effort, best wishes to you Ricky, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thanks and you enjoy the up and coming weekend.
Ricky
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Destiny had to plan and planned, continued planning for controlling things on the outside, without Nature internally; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Destiny had to plan and planned, continued planning for controlling things on the outside, without Nature internally; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Coming to a theater near you!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from mermaids
You have quite a tale here and this is a vivid story that comes alive as I read it. I can see this poem as a mini movie. I have been away for awhile and am glad to be back with my fellow poets.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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You have quite a tale here and this is a vivid story that comes alive as I read it. I can see this poem as a mini movie. I have been away for awhile and am glad to be back with my fellow poets.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Glad to have you back mermaids and I shall write something a little less hot for you in the future!
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Gert sherwood
Good day Ricky I found well reading your free style poem of your book of "Beware the Boy with the Melted Face,while wroth reading and how you wrote about Destiny's how she feels
She still is in her...
'Virtual Solitude.'
"And, just a prisoner of her past regrets!"
"She prays for the day when she can return to the Glen."
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Good day Ricky I found well reading your free style poem of your book of "Beware the Boy with the Melted Face,while wroth reading and how you wrote about Destiny's how she feels
She still is in her...
'Virtual Solitude.'
"And, just a prisoner of her past regrets!"
"She prays for the day when she can return to the Glen."
Gert
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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But Gert, will she and what about those cruel men now?
Ricky
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Good question to ask Ricky1024 let me tell you I myself have regrets to try and to erase, of what happened years ago when I was a child good question what did I do I told others and sincere prayers and told my therapist,told me Forgive those who violated me when I was a mixed up teen ager
Gert
Gert
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even though I was raised by abusive alcoholic parents my father wasn't abusive but my mother was kind of cuz she wasn't very negligent when it comes to us as babies and small children I forgave that a long time ago also.
Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is well done, my friend. The imagery is powerful, as always. The content is moving as it expresses the deep and turbulent emotion of the writer. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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This is well done, my friend. The imagery is powerful, as always. The content is moving as it expresses the deep and turbulent emotion of the writer. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
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Again my pleasure Mystic Angel
And, have a Blessed day!
Ricky