Comment from Lulube

Excellent

Nice to see a bit of a different style. The rhyming was natural and although not set up in a strict pattern, came across at the right times. good job

lulube

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019

Glad you enjoyed your stay here and enjoy your weekend!
Ricky

Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear Ricky, Fate and Destiny seem to be combinations in your life. April Fool's Day is supposed to be funny and happy, it must have been so sad to give Jay's organs away on that day. Dove

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019

Thanks my dear.
Ricky

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Good thoughts Ricky you wrotefor your unforgettable thoughts of Time that cannot be replaced... "After erased, if you really, really, do *Care?"
Of what took place March 31st, 2003 at approximately 8 P.M." "My only son Jason would be involved as a passenger...
"In a car driven by a seventeen-year-old maniac...
Gert

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

I got the only reason I can read live and write about this is because number one time heals all wounds and number to I've done it so so many times

Thanks,
Ricky

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is well done, my friend. The imagery is powerful, as always. The content is moving as it expresses the deep and turbulent emotion of the writer. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks for this
Review.
Ricky

Comment from Agate Lucas

Excellent

A very moving tribute to your son, poignant and touching ! The picture also goes perfectly with your poem. I think there are a few typos, "if only I had known"; "two more younger soldiers." I read your notes underneath, and I think writing a part about his donated heart would make a moving addition too.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thank,
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

A twist of fate can rob us of our loved one by recklessness of someone else. A useless waste of life of a person with so much to look forward before their life was snuffed our.

Condolonces

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks again country ranch writer.
Dr. Ricky 1024

reply by country ranch writer on 20-Aug-2019

Smiles

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A poignant write and life can be taken in an instant when a decision is made and then it is set in stone, we then spend our days thinking: "if only", sad words here Ricky, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019

Thanks again Dolly
Ricky