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Chip's Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Don't Need Love."
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Comment from Lance S. Loria
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A well written Cinquain contest entry with 2-4-6-8-2 syllable counts. A complimentary photo artwork. I like the emotions regarding "raw and real." Good luck.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
    Thank you, Lance.
Comment from LisaMay
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There are certainly times when passion overrules propriety, and we think love is an unnecessary complexity. We can ignore the regret of our shameful actions, but it is actually possible to have love that is also raw and real.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
    Thank you, LisaMay.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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For the different stages of our lives, there is always human need laced in there. And, yes, there are times where we find ourselves at a place physical needs are all there are or all there are room/time for... :) A great offering for the contest, sir -- true life just IS! ;) :) Good luck and thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    I agree, Yvette...as always, thanks for the read/review!
Comment from closetpoetjester
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Holy moly, wow! There was a bit of steam coming off this one, yes sirree

After I wiped my moistened

lenses and took off my

glasses I found I definitely wanted to give you


six


Wonderfully done, just enough poetic titillation to stir the senses, pique interest and get the imagination flowing.

Verry well done, er...what was your name again? LOL

P

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Ah, Phillippa, thank you for the thoughtful, poetic review and the generous rating...glad it stirred something, what's the point otherwise? The last line was well played- a review worthy of a review!
Comment from Tiffanny Brooks
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This is a cool play on Cinquain poetry, and a more sophisticated and elegant view of the one-night stand. :)

I wish you well in the contest!
Tiffanny

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Thanks, Tiffanny!
Comment from misscookie
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Not only the photo capture my attention your words have my mind and emotions spinning in full speed.
i feel for anyone who says they don't need love.
what they are saying to me is they are yearning for it.
they are wearing a mask to hide their pain,
PAIN
THANK YOU FOR SHARING.
COOKIE

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Many thanks, Cookie!
reply by misscookie on 24-Aug-2019
    your very welcome.
    take care
    cookie
Comment from Heather Knight
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Lovely poem. I particularly like the third line where you speak of somewhere raw and real.
Your choice of artwork is also perfect.
Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    And than you for reading/reviewing, Maria!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Chip. And your author's notes you mentioned the picture and I would say that you were verse is well-suited to that picture and vice versa. That might be a week review they do go so well together. Robert

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
    Thanks, Robert.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 23-Aug-2019
    You're welcome!
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Chip, I enjoyed this poem. As a hopeless romantic myself I think there is nothing better than love. With that being said, sometimes you just want unbridled, raw passion, rip my clothes off and ..........

Good job my friend! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
    I agree, Poet..thanks!
Comment from nomi338
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Hm... sounds like someone is ready to let their hair down and do the wild thing without regret or restraint. I have been there, felt that and reveled in the wild freedom of the moment, but all to soon sanity returns and you have to go home, get some sleep, and get ready for school or work.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
    Ha, I'm with you on that, Nomi. Thanks for weighing in!