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A Book of Horror and Honor.

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Comment from babykoala
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I found this peice very emotive and thought provoking..I felt like I wanted to cry whilst reading it and I'm It sure why! You display an amazing ability to stir up emotion in your style of writing and it I think it's brilliant. Thank you for sharing.xx

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019
    Thanks for this dear.
    The next one?
    Ricky
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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Beautiful my friend! Where would we be without the Lord! His hands touch every part of our life. And holds us up when we cannot stand on our own! You have such a blessed heart and attitude! Keep your faith! It looks good on you! :) xoxo

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019
    Much thanks Diana L. Crawford.
    The word 'Light'has many wonderful meanings.
    It's a guide to the realm above...
    It illuminates...
    It warms while allowing us the Vision.
    Without light?
    Truly, this World would be a Darker Place.
    Ricky.
Comment from DonandVicki
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I like the spiritual way that you write. God has given us "Free Love" unconditional love that comes with out cost. Your poem gave me a warm feeling inside.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
    Thanks a million Donald and Vicky.
    Ricky
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Another beautiful dedication to Jay as well as a beautiful recollection of the time afterwards... your faith stands as witness before everyone, Doc-- just wonderful! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
    Thanks again..
    Yvette.
    Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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You deliver some beautifully executed turns of phrase throughout, my friend. There is a sadness that permeates the piece, but it is well tempered by the essence of hope sprinkled in the appropriate places. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 19-Aug-2019
    Thanks Mystic.
    Always yours,
    Ricky
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Beautiful and deep poem. "Within the Hands of God!" I am learning to pray after meeting the son of God. Your poem seems to be a sum of rhetorical questions and a way of getting closer to Him. Good luck with your writing.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
    Central my toiletry comes from above and I've created an angel who passed away April fools Day 2003 and we donate his organs and save lives not only can I help you in any thoughts of Heaven above but I'm also an angel of course I don't think there's many angels on this planet that can write like me if there's any period.
    And thanks for your fine review and good luck with your writing also.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    According to see Lucas here Western novelist he quoted me once and honored me by saying you're still preaching the choir here at fanstory