Comment from Larry5000

Excellent

I like this type of poetic style poem, and I like what you have chosen as your theme for it. Your words have expressed so beautifully being able to sit or stand on a wonderful sandy beach somewhere taking in all the beauty around you, relaxing with not a care in the world. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Larry

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019

Thank you Larry! The beach is my favorite place to be-not that I get there, though, as often as I like. I?m so happy that you enjoyed it! :)

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

This is a very beautiful and well written Tyburn poem about the shoreline and the relaxation there. You used great descriptive words and the video is very lovely too. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019

Thank you Teri! I appreciate that you took time to check it out! xoxo

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Beautiful images made of words and also made from sand, waves and sky.
"Slowing
Flowing
Growing
Blowing" at the shoreline. Good luck with the contest and your writing. Thank you for sharing a piece of heaven.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019

Thank you very much! Sorry for delay in responding! Busy weekend! Glad you enjoyed!!! xoxo