Bottled Feelings
How much I love you.4 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Love is overwhelming and so often cradled silently in our hearts. Wanting to say and hesitating each time we try, all the things we repeat in our minds. It is truly difficult. Your message sings.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Love is overwhelming and so often cradled silently in our hearts. Wanting to say and hesitating each time we try, all the things we repeat in our minds. It is truly difficult. Your message sings.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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This is one of many poems I wrote to my deceased wife. Thank you for your review and stars.
Comment from Henry King
This is an excellent love poem. I like the analogy of your true feelings of expressing your love being bottled up. It does make me chuckle over what could happen if those powerful feelings stayed corked? Blow up like popcorn or fizzle out the base end and ... . Well done
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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This is an excellent love poem. I like the analogy of your true feelings of expressing your love being bottled up. It does make me chuckle over what could happen if those powerful feelings stayed corked? Blow up like popcorn or fizzle out the base end and ... . Well done
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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I enjoyed your humorous review. Thanks for the stars.
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You are very Welcome.
Comment from judester
This is a great entry. Perhaps in the second to last line you say, the love I feel empowers me, more and more each day. This would explain your super powers in the first stanza. And being just a mortal man, perhaps humble, you could use the word simply or I can only say. Just a couple suggestions. judester
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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This is a great entry. Perhaps in the second to last line you say, the love I feel empowers me, more and more each day. This would explain your super powers in the first stanza. And being just a mortal man, perhaps humble, you could use the word simply or I can only say. Just a couple suggestions. judester
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review, suggestions and stars.
Comment from Janetsue
You have well-expressed the feelings of love in this abcb poem posted in Valentine colors. It is a cheerful light verse able to uplift the reader who, admittedly, is a big romantic at heart. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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You have well-expressed the feelings of love in this abcb poem posted in Valentine colors. It is a cheerful light verse able to uplift the reader who, admittedly, is a big romantic at heart. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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I am a bit of a romantic myself. Thank you for the review and stars.
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You're truly welcome!
