Out Standing Stories and Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Around the World in Eighty Days!"A Book of Horror and Honor.
4 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow... written in 1963... what a wonderful 'flashback offering' here, Doc Ricky! And a grandson named Alexander? I can't wait to read more... thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Wow... written in 1963... what a wonderful 'flashback offering' here, Doc Ricky! And a grandson named Alexander? I can't wait to read more... thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Just completed now you vote go for it.
Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely story with a beautiful photograph to compliment it. I hope the balloon ride wish comes true since it is a truly amazing experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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This is a lovely story with a beautiful photograph to compliment it. I hope the balloon ride wish comes true since it is a truly amazing experience. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Why thanks!
I difnt think the post was accepted.
Ricky
Comment from Graybærd
I am not going to pretend to be someone who is a professional writer. Someone who will hit you with grammatical errors and such. I'm giving you a five and assuming the whole story is in quotes and it is a grandfathers endless attempt to spend time with a grandson while his daughter always makes excuses why he can't spend time. You convey the fear of him asking very well.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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I am not going to pretend to be someone who is a professional writer. Someone who will hit you with grammatical errors and such. I'm giving you a five and assuming the whole story is in quotes and it is a grandfathers endless attempt to spend time with a grandson while his daughter always makes excuses why he can't spend time. You convey the fear of him asking very well.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thanks Greybeard I am honored.
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Comment from N. Rabwar
I found this slice of life both interesting and entertaining. I haven't seen any violence yet and I am not sure where it is going, but I will be sure to read the next installment unless it is to violent.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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I found this slice of life both interesting and entertaining. I haven't seen any violence yet and I am not sure where it is going, but I will be sure to read the next installment unless it is to violent.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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It will not be violence but there will be a damn good surprise at the end!
Ricky
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Good. I look forward to it.
