Out Standing Stories and Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Sand!"A Book of Horror and Honor.
6 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
This is a study of personal experiences and thoughts...some of them life-affecting, such as dehydration.
Overall, the posting would be betterby deleting some of the question marks, It is difficult to comprehend why many of them are being used.
Just a couple of things, easily corrected:
Wish I had a hillion cans of cold beer! (do you mean billion?)
Ye,s because now it's nothing but... (Yes,)
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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This is a study of personal experiences and thoughts...some of them life-affecting, such as dehydration.
Overall, the posting would be betterby deleting some of the question marks, It is difficult to comprehend why many of them are being used.
Just a couple of things, easily corrected:
Wish I had a hillion cans of cold beer! (do you mean billion?)
Ye,s because now it's nothing but... (Yes,)
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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I thank spangle i corrected to 2 hours and added more question marks!
Doctor Ricky 1024
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But thanks for that I caught those little boo boos and I actually added more question marks.
Why thanks!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from JLR
Everything you said in your writer's notes and then more. Your continued presentation of the gifted poetry that comes from within the depths of your soul is a poignant reminder that few are chosen to write and write well. Write on and write often.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Everything you said in your writer's notes and then more. Your continued presentation of the gifted poetry that comes from within the depths of your soul is a poignant reminder that few are chosen to write and write well. Write on and write often.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Tomorrow?
There will be a Three Parter.
Making this piece of grief?
Look like a walk in the park!
Entitled...
"Gripping the Edge of the Prefipice!"
Ricky
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Looking forward to more...
Comment from N. Rabwar
Wow! This is a tour de force. It's quite evocative and brims over with intensity. It's about deception, betrayal and when life goes extremely wrong. I can relate exactly.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Wow! This is a tour de force. It's quite evocative and brims over with intensity. It's about deception, betrayal and when life goes extremely wrong. I can relate exactly.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Just letting off a little steam and grief since almost every woman i've ever been involved with from my last girlfriend to my 20-year wife before that and then to my mommy always abused me.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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This was a very fun piece to write I was actually writing this after not being able to sleep to previous night from so many nightmares!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This was a thoroughly engaging read, my friend. I don't remember your ever sharing this much about your early years before and I appreciate your letting me get to know you a bit better. Well done and thak you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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This was a thoroughly engaging read, my friend. I don't remember your ever sharing this much about your early years before and I appreciate your letting me get to know you a bit better. Well done and thak you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Tomorrow.
Wait and See?
Ricky
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This was written after I had woken up a few nights ago after so many nightmares I could feel pain.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Ricky
I thought you were going to talk about being in hell in that first stanza. Don't know where I got that!
This seems like a love story. You must have the most amazing life and lots of it seems to be filled with regret and memories of those you have lost. This is a little different. Bravo.
xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Hi Ricky
I thought you were going to talk about being in hell in that first stanza. Don't know where I got that!
This seems like a love story. You must have the most amazing life and lots of it seems to be filled with regret and memories of those you have lost. This is a little different. Bravo.
xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thanks again kiwi
❤️ XOXO ❤️💋😘
Ricky
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Thanks Miss kiwi this is actually written after short night of many nightmares.
Ricky
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We look back at what we once thought were riches in the past Ricky and find that the true wealth lies somewhere else, this is a learning curve, I enjoyed your sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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We look back at what we once thought were riches in the past Ricky and find that the true wealth lies somewhere else, this is a learning curve, I enjoyed your sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thanks again Dolly.
Ricky