Finding the 'Real' in Real Life
Missing the trees because of the forest...19 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This trimeric poem, Finding the Real in Real Life, has the proper formatting and suggests that driven people may drive by life's meaningful stops in pursuit of the end game. Lives not lived are deemed successful failures.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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This trimeric poem, Finding the Real in Real Life, has the proper formatting and suggests that driven people may drive by life's meaningful stops in pursuit of the end game. Lives not lived are deemed successful failures.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your wonderfully insightful review!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your trimeric is very well-written and thought-provoking, conveying a powerful theme. One who is always rushing to finish one thing to dash off to the next misses so much.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Your trimeric is very well-written and thought-provoking, conveying a powerful theme. One who is always rushing to finish one thing to dash off to the next misses so much.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
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Thank you for taking the time with this wonderful review!!
Comment from WryWriter
Your poem makes valid and pointed statements on life itself. The poem has great flow and rhyming. I especially liked the use of the rhyming words "opaque" and "awake." My favorite stanza is the first. Beautiful artwork choice for theme. Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Your poem makes valid and pointed statements on life itself. The poem has great flow and rhyming. I especially liked the use of the rhyming words "opaque" and "awake." My favorite stanza is the first. Beautiful artwork choice for theme. Enjoyed!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for your encouraging comments and lovely review!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mystery Writer. The poem includes so e interesting questions. I believe we often allow our glasses to become opaque and we miss much because we choose not to see it. The opacity of the glasses are the excuse and not the reason. (my interpretation) Nice job. Robert
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer. The poem includes so e interesting questions. I believe we often allow our glasses to become opaque and we miss much because we choose not to see it. The opacity of the glasses are the excuse and not the reason. (my interpretation) Nice job. Robert
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful comments and positive review!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Maybe I need to change my prescription. (I don't understand. I didn't need glasses fifteen years ago.) I found the choice of background and font colors difficult to read. Once I read it, it's very good.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Maybe I need to change my prescription. (I don't understand. I didn't need glasses fifteen years ago.) I found the choice of background and font colors difficult to read. Once I read it, it's very good.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful Trimeric, the descending lines holding and fitting in perfectly with your continuous story, enhanced with beautiful artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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What a wonderful Trimeric, the descending lines holding and fitting in perfectly with your continuous story, enhanced with beautiful artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you for such an awesome and encouraging review... this was my first time with a 'Trimeric'!
Comment from Richard J
Ahhh, so enchanting!
The artwork and color choices, make for such a beautifully rendered poem, both in visual and composition appeal.
Lends a wispy, dreamlike ambience, that seems to drift lightly, smoothly, and deeply into the reader's mind, heart, and soul.
If this doesn't win, the voters need new glasses. : )
Blessings to you for sharing such sheer wonderment! ~ Richard
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Ahhh, so enchanting!
The artwork and color choices, make for such a beautifully rendered poem, both in visual and composition appeal.
Lends a wispy, dreamlike ambience, that seems to drift lightly, smoothly, and deeply into the reader's mind, heart, and soul.
If this doesn't win, the voters need new glasses. : )
Blessings to you for sharing such sheer wonderment! ~ Richard
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Wow -- thank you so very much for such an awesome review... you have really put a wonderfully, encouraging cap on a long week!! This was my first try at one of these... wrestled with it quite a bit to get it to where it is...LOL! :) Take care!
Comment from Gail Denham
Trimeric - good job on that form. I like the phrase "the busy-ness you make" boy that's for sure - how busy must we be - not all that busy that we don't take time for our loved ones - take time to worship and reflect on our God.
Good poem
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Trimeric - good job on that form. I like the phrase "the busy-ness you make" boy that's for sure - how busy must we be - not all that busy that we don't take time for our loved ones - take time to worship and reflect on our God.
Good poem
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your uplifting review!
Comment from Sugarray77
A beautifully written and presented verse, Yvette. I enjoyed reading this intricately constructed poem as it flowed from one observation to another. . It is obviously a poetic form, but I cannot remember which one. Good job.
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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A beautifully written and presented verse, Yvette. I enjoyed reading this intricately constructed poem as it flowed from one observation to another. . It is obviously a poetic form, but I cannot remember which one. Good job.
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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It's a trimeric contest entry.... ;) Thanx for your encouraging words, ma'am! ;)
Comment from June Sargent
Great food for thought here. I often have to stop and force myself to look at the roses- and then sniff them as well. We're all on a journey through life, but it's much more enjoyable when we take the blinders off. Thanks for the reminder.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Great food for thought here. I often have to stop and force myself to look at the roses- and then sniff them as well. We're all on a journey through life, but it's much more enjoyable when we take the blinders off. Thanks for the reminder.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your time and your review.
