Winter Beauty
Cold and snow can be beautiful3 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very nice depicting the foster artistry of the winter: "spreading soft, snow-white blankets". Very clever personification "Father Winter". Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Very nice depicting the foster artistry of the winter: "spreading soft, snow-white blankets". Very clever personification "Father Winter". Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for the read and the comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Sugarray77
Good job on this frosty 5-7-5. I like your choice of art that enhances your verse and sets the tone. Using the chilling descriptions of frozen snow is a good way to create the mood. Good job and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Good job on this frosty 5-7-5. I like your choice of art that enhances your verse and sets the tone. Using the chilling descriptions of frozen snow is a good way to create the mood. Good job and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for your feedback and review.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct theme and line / syllable count. The imagery is well executed, but I am pretty sure the last line has been done before. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct theme and line / syllable count. The imagery is well executed, but I am pretty sure the last line has been done before. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the feedback. Should I change last line?
