Forever Young
Though you're gone, I visit you often...13 total reviews
Comment from Nike23
I like your trinet poem. Your word choice is vivid and descriptive. Your poem brings forth images in the reader's mind. I like the last stanza it closes the poem nicely. Great job and good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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I like your trinet poem. Your word choice is vivid and descriptive. Your poem brings forth images in the reader's mind. I like the last stanza it closes the poem nicely. Great job and good luck.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review this morning!
Comment from kahpot
What a beautiful poem and Trinet, your words speak volumes of a forever love, This is not a down on this wonderful work but I must ask about the chosen artwork, although it states forever united it just does not seem to fit with this excellent work? no disrespect meant, is there a chance of change, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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What a beautiful poem and Trinet, your words speak volumes of a forever love, This is not a down on this wonderful work but I must ask about the chosen artwork, although it states forever united it just does not seem to fit with this excellent work? no disrespect meant, is there a chance of change, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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My sincere thanks for your review and your suggestion.
Comment from LisaMay
Your skilfully handled trinet carries a lot of scene-setting description to put us in the picture about this love that has endured down the years as a memory of younger days. The reader gets quite a strong picture of both people.
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Your skilfully handled trinet carries a lot of scene-setting description to put us in the picture about this love that has endured down the years as a memory of younger days. The reader gets quite a strong picture of both people.
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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My sincere thanks for your wonderful review!
