Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This sounds like the start to a perfect day and I shared your patio with you here and your pot of coffee to get your day started, a delightful read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-A very nice poem
for the contest.
-I like all of the nature imagery.
-You have used so
many really good descriptions
like "Trees sparkle."
-I like how the poem has
a smooth progression from
taking a walk, relaxing,
and finally watching all
of the animals and birds.
-It is a "perfect morning."
-Good luck in the contest.
-I think you mean "slight wind."

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Thanks for the correction; I have edited.

reply by Pam (respa) on 09-Aug-2019

You are very welcome.