Timeless
Love affair4 total reviews
Comment from rockmann
Very poignant. Your poem is one of the few that I can totally relate to. I wouldn't change a thing. While not a poet guy, I can feel the emotion in your effort. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Very poignant. Your poem is one of the few that I can totally relate to. I wouldn't change a thing. While not a poet guy, I can feel the emotion in your effort. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thank you for this very nice review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
What an absolutely exceptional poem about love! This is the kind of love everyone strives to have and if they find it then they are very lucky! Great poem! Good luck in your contest!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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What an absolutely exceptional poem about love! This is the kind of love everyone strives to have and if they find it then they are very lucky! Great poem! Good luck in your contest!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you for this very kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In darkness, distress, and when time goes wrong, you will continue loving her, promoting your actual love to practice love is unconditional and timeless; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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In darkness, distress, and when time goes wrong, you will continue loving her, promoting your actual love to practice love is unconditional and timeless; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reading. Its always a pleasure to get your opinion.
Comment from Kiera Haley
This is really beautiful. One critique I have is that it should be "lustfulness" rather than "lust-fullness". My favourite part of the poem is "Then hours go by but we're unaware,
a clock has no place in this world we created.
Time cannot measure the feelings we share." I really like how you brought the beginning of the poem back to the end. Great job and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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This is really beautiful. One critique I have is that it should be "lustfulness" rather than "lust-fullness". My favourite part of the poem is "Then hours go by but we're unaware,
a clock has no place in this world we created.
Time cannot measure the feelings we share." I really like how you brought the beginning of the poem back to the end. Great job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you for such a nice review. I agree with your advice and changed that...my computer did that on its own, I didn't think it looked right! Thanks again.
