Out Standing Stories and Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "I Give You All of Me?"A Book of Horror and Honor.
8 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
heartfelt but humorous at the same time. cleverly written incorporating lyrics from many songs. always a fun way to write.
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lulube
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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heartfelt but humorous at the same time. cleverly written incorporating lyrics from many songs. always a fun way to write.
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lulube
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thanks lulu!
Ricky
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welcome
Winter Spring Summer or Fall, All you have to do is call, And I'll be there, yes I will, You've got a friend.
lulube
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Sweet Love.
Ricky
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt love poem. True love will not reject anything that is part of who they love. When we say we love someone we accept all of them, the whole package is what we get.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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A very well-written heartfelt love poem. True love will not reject anything that is part of who they love. When we say we love someone we accept all of them, the whole package is what we get.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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True words.
No better said.
Ricky.
Comment from moongirlwriter
This is a heartwrenching poem of love, with a feeling of. . .am I enough? Then also worrying about being loved for the good and the bad. We've all been there and it does seem you are your biggest critic. The writing says all the right words but as in most writing. . .it needs some editing. Many words should be removed so we don't lose the real meaning of your heart. Please read it outloud and look for the words that are most important. Then take a look again and see what you think. Love the vulnerability of this poem and the artwork as well.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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This is a heartwrenching poem of love, with a feeling of. . .am I enough? Then also worrying about being loved for the good and the bad. We've all been there and it does seem you are your biggest critic. The writing says all the right words but as in most writing. . .it needs some editing. Many words should be removed so we don't lose the real meaning of your heart. Please read it outloud and look for the words that are most important. Then take a look again and see what you think. Love the vulnerability of this poem and the artwork as well.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I found one on my own but thanks. All the others gave it its deserved five.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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I apologize if I've offended you. . .these were only MY thoughts and it is YOUR poem. If it works for you. . .that's all that really counts.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Beautiful poem, Rick, so much emotion and so much care for yourself in this piece! I'm so glad that you can see through one who may not really be there for you! I love how you incorporated Roberta Flack's song in this! xo
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Beautiful poem, Rick, so much emotion and so much care for yourself in this piece! I'm so glad that you can see through one who may not really be there for you! I love how you incorporated Roberta Flack's song in this! xo
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this one Diana!
Ricky.
Comment from Janetsue
I like the intermingling of song lyrics with your thoughts and emotions concerning love. We need to be accepted for who we are because it shows that we are being valued as an individual. Everyone is different and true love means that we have found somebody who understands and appreciates the person we are inside.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I like the intermingling of song lyrics with your thoughts and emotions concerning love. We need to be accepted for who we are because it shows that we are being valued as an individual. Everyone is different and true love means that we have found somebody who understands and appreciates the person we are inside.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Glad y6ou enjoyed it Spangle.
Ricky
Comment from kahpot
Very well said, everyone wants and needs love, whether it is to give or to have the most important thing is that it can be shared, and yes everyone's heart is hungry, very well done and thanks for sharing****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Very well said, everyone wants and needs love, whether it is to give or to have the most important thing is that it can be shared, and yes everyone's heart is hungry, very well done and thanks for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks****kahpot
Ricky
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow .... although a love poem in some respects, it is also a bearing of the soul to show heartbreak in there as well. It is tough to try and get burned...not sure if I'd wish to navigate those waters again... Thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Wow .... although a love poem in some respects, it is also a bearing of the soul to show heartbreak in there as well. It is tough to try and get burned...not sure if I'd wish to navigate those waters again... Thank you for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks Yvette.
From my beginning of conception with my mother to My First Love at age 20 you only want to marry me and wanted my money to my wife of 20 years until an ex-girlfriend it's been or what you would say you don't wish to navigate those Waters again so I think I'm pretty much an expert on it now.
Ricky
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is lovely, Ricky. You are so very right in that everyone wants to be loved for who they are, the good and the not so good, and everyone has a heart that hungers for companionship. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This is lovely, Ricky. You are so very right in that everyone wants to be loved for who they are, the good and the not so good, and everyone has a heart that hungers for companionship. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Love can be a mystery First source I love you and what you first have two number one love yourself did your family your friends in your church and then there's I'm in love with you which is the best it's like two red roses intertwined green thorns bearing stem showing it's forever and a gift from God above.
Thanks again Angel.
Ricky