senryu (what a nice surprise!)
Doing good deeds.11 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
This not a surprise. It is a very good Senyru post. Like your selected illustration to match your text. Good choice of text and background color - nice contrast.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This not a surprise. It is a very good Senyru post. Like your selected illustration to match your text. Good choice of text and background color - nice contrast.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Mark! I quite like these short pieces. Some on FS are quite scathing about the brief forms but I find them an intriguing challenge to come up with something a bit different.
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Touché - the short ones are my favorite ones - for writing and reviewing!
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... and you do both activities well.
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match.
The message made me smile not only did it capture my attention but people always tell how good they feel after talking to me or reading the word and thoughts for today, that is was makes me feel bless.
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match.
The message made me smile not only did it capture my attention but people always tell how good they feel after talking to me or reading the word and thoughts for today, that is was makes me feel bless.
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your comments. You are an upbeat, inspiring person who makes people happy.
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Thank you for those kind words I just tell it
like it is, and I love to spreading happiness
Have a nice day
Cookie
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... and you too, Cookie.
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Util next time.
Cookie
Comment from Darlene BoClair
Good deeds is truly a poetic message of the human spirit.
It's exactly what one is looking for to be blessed of your world today.
I like the format and structure of this poem. I like the artwork so pleasing to the gratitude of us all.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Good deeds is truly a poetic message of the human spirit.
It's exactly what one is looking for to be blessed of your world today.
I like the format and structure of this poem. I like the artwork so pleasing to the gratitude of us all.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your kind comments, Darlene.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line an syllable count. The content is clearly human nature based as it delivers a lovely bit of gratitude. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line an syllable count. The content is clearly human nature based as it delivers a lovely bit of gratitude. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this poem with a good message and a positive feeling. Have a great day and be blessed! Good job expressing your message in a creative way.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks for sharing this poem with a good message and a positive feeling. Have a great day and be blessed! Good job expressing your message in a creative way.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written senryu about being surprised sometimes by the deeds that are filled with goodness and we are graciously blessed by that.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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A very well-written senryu about being surprised sometimes by the deeds that are filled with goodness and we are graciously blessed by that.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, I enjoyed your poem. You did a really good job in your execution of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest. It would definitely be a surprise if most peoples deeds were filled with goodness.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Hello fellow poet, I enjoyed your poem. You did a really good job in your execution of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest. It would definitely be a surprise if most peoples deeds were filled with goodness.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review comments.
It would be a nice surprise, that's for sure.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Having completed a good deed can certainly lift spirits for quite a while, as opposed to bad deed that weigh heavy on our conscience for years and haunt us. Well said, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Having completed a good deed can certainly lift spirits for quite a while, as opposed to bad deed that weigh heavy on our conscience for years and haunt us. Well said, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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And receiving a good deed can be a surprise sometimes. Nice surprise! My father was a Scout leader and he checked in with us at dinner time each day to see what we had done each day for someone else.
Comment from jenintorre
Hi Lisa May
Your senyru poem is really nice and uplifting. It put a big smile on my face. Love the artwork. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. All the best. Jen
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hi Lisa May
Your senyru poem is really nice and uplifting. It put a big smile on my face. Love the artwork. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. All the best. Jen
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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It's a cheery little one... I was pleased to come up with it to bring a smile.
Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Patty Palmer
I enjoyed this poem! What a great feeling to know that your deeds are filled with goodness and it's always a great feeling when you feel blessed!
"Keep right on writing!"
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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I enjoyed this poem! What a great feeling to know that your deeds are filled with goodness and it's always a great feeling when you feel blessed!
"Keep right on writing!"
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Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Yes, it is a nice cheerful little piece. I was happy with it myself, so I am pleased you like it too.
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You're welcome!