Quiescence
Deliberations on the divine...30 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
The title sums it up: a variation on Quiet Essence.
There is a saying : "The deeper the silence, the higher the inspiration', which your poem seems to allude to. Quietude is a necessary zone for peace and harmony of inner strength, and drawing close to perfection.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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The title sums it up: a variation on Quiet Essence.
There is a saying : "The deeper the silence, the higher the inspiration', which your poem seems to allude to. Quietude is a necessary zone for peace and harmony of inner strength, and drawing close to perfection.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanx so very much for your review on this one, L-M -- there's not enough 'silence' these days....it's like the kiddos are scared of it!! ;) ;) Have a great week over there!! ;);) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Fine job Yvette. It has a message that resonates with people who are looking for peace. The soul is eternal but the body is not. Many people never feed their soul like they do their body. Z
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Fine job Yvette. It has a message that resonates with people who are looking for peace. The soul is eternal but the body is not. Many people never feed their soul like they do their body. Z
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thanx so much for dropping by on this one, Z -- These shorties for me change topic until one happens that all parts of the brain agree with... and I'm only kinda joking! :) Take care and have a great week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh the soul has such power to be around forever, especially if we have made an impact before we die, wise words here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Oh the soul has such power to be around forever, especially if we have made an impact before we die, wise words here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanx so very much for your review on this one, Dolly -- always so good to hear from you over here!! ;) ;) Have a great week over there!! ;);) Yvette
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a very philosophical poem. And as usual the presentation is divine.
Thanks so much for making me think. And good luck in the contest. You deserve it.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This is a very philosophical poem. And as usual the presentation is divine.
Thanks so much for making me think. And good luck in the contest. You deserve it.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanx so very much for your review on this one, Lady Maria -- always so good to hear from you!! ;) ;) Have a great week over there!! ;);) Yvette
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise, thought-provoking poem poetically addresses the human soul, which, though itself silent, can be moved by God's Holy Spirit. Yes, eternity lies within the soul.
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Your concise, thought-provoking poem poetically addresses the human soul, which, though itself silent, can be moved by God's Holy Spirit. Yes, eternity lies within the soul.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanx so very much for your review on this one, Janice -- always so good to hear from you!! ;) ;) Have a great week over there!! ;);) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
Ok Yvette. The mystery is solved. I always wanted to know where words that whisper in the night came from. :) They have lived forever locked in our soul and in a moment of feeling, emerge and speak. That's so cool! Thank you for writing about something I had never heard off. This is a good entry for the 5 Line Poem.
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Ok Yvette. The mystery is solved. I always wanted to know where words that whisper in the night came from. :) They have lived forever locked in our soul and in a moment of feeling, emerge and speak. That's so cool! Thank you for writing about something I had never heard off. This is a good entry for the 5 Line Poem.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Wow, Jose!! This is such a wonderful bright spot amidst all my 'school prep crud and meetings and... ugh! :) Thanx so very much for your wonderful review here and for those awesome stars! ;) ;) Have a great week out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the poetry contest Yvette. You created this on the bases of silence, which is important to us and an endearment that is a must at times. It is also precious when obtained.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Good luck in the poetry contest Yvette. You created this on the bases of silence, which is important to us and an endearment that is a must at times. It is also precious when obtained.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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I find that it is actually quite loud...if that makes any sense... ??? :) Thanx for the review, Alie -- take care out there! ;) Yvette
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It does indeed make sense, you are so welcome Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written five-Line poem about the quietness we are looking for sometimes we can find in perfect silence if our souls where no outside turmoil can disturb the quiescence.
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A very well-written five-Line poem about the quietness we are looking for sometimes we can find in perfect silence if our souls where no outside turmoil can disturb the quiescence.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanx so very much for dropping in on this one, Sandra -- you take care over there! :) Yvette
Comment from Loren .
Very creative and serene. Giving the reader a moment of reflective thought which leads to peace and yes, acknowledgment. You make itt look so easy with so few words. Loren
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Very creative and serene. Giving the reader a moment of reflective thought which leads to peace and yes, acknowledgment. You make itt look so easy with so few words. Loren
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you, THANK YOU for this awesome review, Loren, and especially for those bright, shiny stars.... they're my reassurance that there light at the end of all this teacher meeting/school prep/parent&student orientations madness!! ;) ;) So glad this one touched you, sir -- take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, Yvette.
You've penned some pretty deep thoughts for a five-line poem.
Wonderfully and colourfully presented too, as always.
Every poet and writer must find his or her unique niche.
I believe you've discovered yours.
Keep up the g-r-r-r-r-r-r-reat work!
Hugs,
~Dean
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hey, Yvette.
You've penned some pretty deep thoughts for a five-line poem.
Wonderfully and colourfully presented too, as always.
Every poet and writer must find his or her unique niche.
I believe you've discovered yours.
Keep up the g-r-r-r-r-r-r-reat work!
Hugs,
~Dean
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanx so much for this wonderful review, Sir Dean -- and great to hear from you, sir!! :) Hope all's well over there.... I've begun the meeting/orientation madness leading up to school next week so, I'll probably not be around as much.... you and the Gidgette take care! ;) Yvette
