Seasons
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Green and Pleasant Land"Colors of each of the 4
10 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely Zejel Trisha about all the things you loved about England, though like all countries, todays pace is somewhat different to days gone by. Really enjoyed this read.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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This is a lovely Zejel Trisha about all the things you loved about England, though like all countries, todays pace is somewhat different to days gone by. Really enjoyed this read.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Valda, I appreciate your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I like that you wrote about your ancestry here....did not know you were born in England! ;) :) Love your zejel, Trisha -- great flow in your painting of the picture of your land of birth! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Oh, I like that you wrote about your ancestry here....did not know you were born in England! ;) :) Love your zejel, Trisha -- great flow in your painting of the picture of your land of birth! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the style, thanks for your positive review! hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this interesting writing about how you appreciate the traditions from England and how things have changed so much in today's world. Have a great day and enjoy the British!
Bill
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thanks for sharing this interesting writing about how you appreciate the traditions from England and how things have changed so much in today's world. Have a great day and enjoy the British!
Bill
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the style, thanks for your positive review! hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Zejel poem about England where you live, telling us about the beauty of the green pastures in the countryside and his much it all changed over the years into stressful ways.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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A very well-written Zejel poem about England where you live, telling us about the beauty of the green pastures in the countryside and his much it all changed over the years into stressful ways.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the style, thanks for your positive review! hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not to mention the fish 'n chips Trisha! I have just come back from London having had a fabulous weekend with my daughter! Taking in a show and eating out, there is so much to do in London that we needed more time! I loved your poem about England, the contrast of the Dales and the fast pace in London, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Not to mention the fish 'n chips Trisha! I have just come back from London having had a fabulous weekend with my daughter! Taking in a show and eating out, there is so much to do in London that we needed more time! I loved your poem about England, the contrast of the Dales and the fast pace in London, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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I?m glad you liked the poem. Thanks for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
I love England, too, and I hate to see the way it's being taken over. I love all the things you mentioned except the bigger cities. It was the countryside I liked best. You did a good job with this challenge. 8-)
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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I love England, too, and I hate to see the way it's being taken over. I love all the things you mentioned except the bigger cities. It was the countryside I liked best. You did a good job with this challenge. 8-)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Yes, before the influx England was a lovely place . Now government is in upheaval and is controlled in parts by other cultural mores . It?s a shame!
Thanks for your positive review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from N. Rabwar
I love the nostalgia and evocative imagery of this poem. It paint a picture of England in times gone by and captures the ineffable sadness of realizing that what you once loved so dearly no longer exists.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I love the nostalgia and evocative imagery of this poem. It paint a picture of England in times gone by and captures the ineffable sadness of realizing that what you once loved so dearly no longer exists.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the style, thanks for your positive review! hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rikki66
Very well done love of country the place of origin is to me a natural human emotion. ********************************************************************************
Rikki:)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Very well done love of country the place of origin is to me a natural human emotion. ********************************************************************************
Rikki:)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the style, thanks for your positive review! hugs, Trisha
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You are welcome.
Rikki:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your zejel, Bucketlist. Good job with the complex style. Your words flow smoothly, the rhymes are correct, the color scheme works well, and your topic is beautifully expressed. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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You did a great job with your zejel, Bucketlist. Good job with the complex style. Your words flow smoothly, the rhymes are correct, the color scheme works well, and your topic is beautifully expressed. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the style, thanks for your very positive review! hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver a structurally sound piece of poetic art. The content is delightful as you walk the reader through all of the things that make each location mentioned so special to you. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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You deliver a structurally sound piece of poetic art. The content is delightful as you walk the reader through all of the things that make each location mentioned so special to you. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you so very much!
Hugs, Trisha
