My Mysterious Muse
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Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your musings about your muse and the eye-catching artwork. I enjoyed your rhymed couplets and your description, which approximates my muse as well! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
Thank you for sharing your musings about your muse and the eye-catching artwork. I enjoyed your rhymed couplets and your description, which approximates my muse as well! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thanks. It seems these muses are unreliable as a species. The contest is over. I came in second.
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Congratulations on having your poem so well received. Your muse came through after all! Smiles- Joan
Comment from Brett Matthew West
That muse sounds mighty familiar. Don't they always win? Touch of humor thrown in for good measure. Strong rhymes throughout including "work/murk" and "drunk/junk".
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
That muse sounds mighty familiar. Don't they always win? Touch of humor thrown in for good measure. Strong rhymes throughout including "work/murk" and "drunk/junk".
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thanks. Yep, they always win, even in the middle of the night.
Comment from Winslow
Dear Cindy,
Wow, what a muse you have. How about letting me borrow her sometime? My muse is a Janus, and gives me both good and bad advice. LOL Your rhymes are spot on and the verse rolls off the tongue. Well done.
Cheers,
Winslow
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
Dear Cindy,
Wow, what a muse you have. How about letting me borrow her sometime? My muse is a Janus, and gives me both good and bad advice. LOL Your rhymes are spot on and the verse rolls off the tongue. Well done.
Cheers,
Winslow
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the six! I'm afraid that muse of mine pretty much does her own thing. She might be out getting ideas for me or dropping by teasing other writers. No idea. She may or may not get along with other muses. LOL Thanks again for all the lovely stars.
Comment from BeasPeas
What a terrific poem. Enjoyed this so much. The work/murk rhyme is great. Sorry not to have a sixer for you. Best of luck in the contest if it's not over yet. Loved the part about her waking you up in the middle of the night. Happened to me last night. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
What a terrific poem. Enjoyed this so much. The work/murk rhyme is great. Sorry not to have a sixer for you. Best of luck in the contest if it's not over yet. Loved the part about her waking you up in the middle of the night. Happened to me last night. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thanks. I'll take a virtual six. The contest is over. I came in second.
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Congratulations.
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
I loved the image with the poem. Excellent poem with great rhyming scheme. May I ask who is your muse? Thank you for sharing this with us.
Blessings. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
I loved the image with the poem. Excellent poem with great rhyming scheme. May I ask who is your muse? Thank you for sharing this with us.
Blessings. ~Brenda
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks. Sometimes it seems there's a little sprite fluttering around, but she's imaginary.
Comment from Ogden
All in all, it sounds like your muse is holding your own, although you are helping her out a bit. Sometimes, don't you have to wonder who's in charge, for goodness sakes? Anyway, it doesn't matter, because we all have to take the muse we're dealt.
Good luck in the contest, Cindy.
Don
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
All in all, it sounds like your muse is holding your own, although you are helping her out a bit. Sometimes, don't you have to wonder who's in charge, for goodness sakes? Anyway, it doesn't matter, because we all have to take the muse we're dealt.
Good luck in the contest, Cindy.
Don
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks. Yeah, you're right. I'll have to tell that little sprite that if won't learn her place, I'll have to feed her to the cat. Thanks for the good wishes. The contest is over. I, or should I say we, came in second.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is a beautifully written poem for this contest! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Loved the first line about your muse being drunk! LoL! This is full of wonderful character and ideas!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
This is a beautifully written poem for this contest! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Loved the first line about your muse being drunk! LoL! This is full of wonderful character and ideas!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks. It was a fun write. That little muse was truly present for this one. Guess she wanted a poem about herself. LOL
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Ha! I love these challenges because they bring things out in me that I would never otherwise think of to write about!
Comment from Poetofheart2013
What a very powerful poem
full of really good emotions and
feeling. It flows really good I love the
feel of it. I really enjoy reading it.
Keep up the y.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
What a very powerful poem
full of really good emotions and
feeling. It flows really good I love the
feel of it. I really enjoy reading it.
Keep up the y.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks. I guess that little muse was present for this one. She must have wanted a poem about herself. lol
Comment from Deborah Bromlow
This is a very delightful poem! I especially like the lines "Whispering not but noise and junk" and "The hours she keeps are her own". Inspiration certainly keeps its own hours and not all inspiration is worthy. You nailed it! Great job!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
This is a very delightful poem! I especially like the lines "Whispering not but noise and junk" and "The hours she keeps are her own". Inspiration certainly keeps its own hours and not all inspiration is worthy. You nailed it! Great job!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks. She certainly does keep odd hours!
Comment from Sanku
This is a very interesting poem about ones muse. muses keep their own time .They come and disturb you at the oddest hour. the worst is when she comes at night and you have to sit and write through the night.
all the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
This is a very interesting poem about ones muse. muses keep their own time .They come and disturb you at the oddest hour. the worst is when she comes at night and you have to sit and write through the night.
all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks for the stars and good wishes. The contest is over. I came in second.