Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
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3 total reviews
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Solid five line poetry contest entry with good 2-2-5-7-5 syllable counts. An enjoyable read with a type of "golden rule" regarding prayer. No edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Solid five line poetry contest entry with good 2-2-5-7-5 syllable counts. An enjoyable read with a type of "golden rule" regarding prayer. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your valued review, God's Blessings to you and your family.
Comment from Tpa
The poem was a delight to read and made me absorb each word and to reflect the meaning how valuable prayer is. You expelled quite a lot in so little words. I wish you the best.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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The poem was a delight to read and made me absorb each word and to reflect the meaning how valuable prayer is. You expelled quite a lot in so little words. I wish you the best.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
Blessings to you.
Comment from Amale Rhodes
"Chose directed roads...ease your destinations end." Are you saying that we should take the clear path in life? Not make things complicated. A creative use of your syllables!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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"Chose directed roads...ease your destinations end." Are you saying that we should take the clear path in life? Not make things complicated. A creative use of your syllables!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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A reference to how prayer can help before making any journey's decisions. Thank you for the review. God's Blessings to you.