Comment from Breda Lunniss

Average

Beautiful Poem.
But if i am correct, your second verse only has 6 Syllables instead of 7.
You may like to double check
Good Luck with the competition

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019

I'm afraid you are not correct second verse has required seven syllables. See https:/www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/
Thanks for the read.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Very inspirational. The image and words reminds us that God's gift to us each day is thanking Him for the morning sunshine and bright sunny days.
Today we have gorgeous weather here too; the goodness that God creates.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019

We have gorgeous weather here also. Thanks for the read and the comments.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The imagery in line one
is very good.
-I like the positive outlook
and message in your poem.
-The sunbeams do bring
happiness and joy.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-One very small thing-
Brings should be Bring.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019

Thanks so much for your kind read and review. Much appreciated.

reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Aug-2019

You are very welcome.