To the Least of These
A 75-word Story offering for the contest17 total reviews
Comment from HarryT
Excellent story with a hook, a middle and a good ending. Keeps the read wanting to know more. Believable dialog all in 75 words. The characters seem real. Great job.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Excellent story with a hook, a middle and a good ending. Keeps the read wanting to know more. Believable dialog all in 75 words. The characters seem real. Great job.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Wow, Harry -- THANK YOU for this awesome review and those lovely stars, sir! ;) You have certainly put a bright spot in my weekend over here! ;) Be sure to stop by any time and have a wonderful weekend! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Amale Rhodes
I really loved your piece. It pulled at my heart strings and I could see it unfolding in real life. I've definitely been that person, the one who tries to share her faith and it is not welcomed. Thank you!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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I really loved your piece. It pulled at my heart strings and I could see it unfolding in real life. I've definitely been that person, the one who tries to share her faith and it is not welcomed. Thank you!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you so very much for this awesome review, Amale - and I am so very pleased that you enjoyed it! ;) ;) Know that you are welcome to stop by any time and have a wonderful week ahead! ;) Yvette
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I love the spiritual message in this story and particularly thought your last two lines were perfection. If I were a homeless person, that response would have had my head turning, as I would be wondering who this God was that believed in me.
Great choice of artwork.
Skilled writing from beginning to end.
This is an excellent contest entry, and I truly wish you the very best.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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I love the spiritual message in this story and particularly thought your last two lines were perfection. If I were a homeless person, that response would have had my head turning, as I would be wondering who this God was that believed in me.
Great choice of artwork.
Skilled writing from beginning to end.
This is an excellent contest entry, and I truly wish you the very best.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful comments!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-five-word story, To the Least of These, has the required word count and finds the lost and downtrodden lass being sent an angel of mercy. Nice.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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This seventy-five-word story, To the Least of These, has the required word count and finds the lost and downtrodden lass being sent an angel of mercy. Nice.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review!
Comment from Ellie White
Love the darkness. Thought it was going to be the little match girl. Liked the ending. The perfect response to those words
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Love the darkness. Thought it was going to be the little match girl. Liked the ending. The perfect response to those words
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review!
Comment from Nike23
This is a good story. I think if you had a larger word count it could be more developed. Be careful that it doesn't come across as a well known story if that makes sense.
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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This is a good story. I think if you had a larger word count it could be more developed. Be careful that it doesn't come across as a well known story if that makes sense.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
There needs to be more people who are there for those in need and in it for the right reasons. Sometimes we just need someone who looks past when we got going on in life. They won't let us push them away. Those are the people that make all the difference. Thanks for the reminder.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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There needs to be more people who are there for those in need and in it for the right reasons. Sometimes we just need someone who looks past when we got going on in life. They won't let us push them away. Those are the people that make all the difference. Thanks for the reminder.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Such an awesome review!! Thank you for those wonderful stars!!
Comment from w.j.debi
You know how to spin a tale. Excellent descriptions to set the scene. Excellent dialogue to reveal the characters and your theme. I love the last line and the optimism is conveys.
Word counts appears to be spot on to me.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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You know how to spin a tale. Excellent descriptions to set the scene. Excellent dialogue to reveal the characters and your theme. I love the last line and the optimism is conveys.
Word counts appears to be spot on to me.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review! Love your profile pic!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette. That's really a good story demonstrating two sides of hopelessness. There are the hopeful that are willing to reach out and there are the hopeless that are not always willing to accept it. Good luck in the contest. Z
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Hello Yvette. That's really a good story demonstrating two sides of hopelessness. There are the hopeful that are willing to reach out and there are the hopeless that are not always willing to accept it. Good luck in the contest. Z
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanx for the review on this little shorty -- sometimes this are a challenge and sometimes they just come out of nowhere and write themselves....case in point here :) :) Thanx for dropping by! ;) Yvette
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you're welcome
Comment from Rikki66
Having worked in a position were I took both men and women to shelters and rehab facilities, I know this attitude well. In just 75 words you have captured what I heard hours listening to.
Rikki:)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Having worked in a position were I took both men and women to shelters and rehab facilities, I know this attitude well. In just 75 words you have captured what I heard hours listening to.
Rikki:)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review!!
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you are most welcome.
Rikki:)
