Forget-Me-Not
A nonet with love from the heart.9 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
I love roses too, but I was expecting to see a forget-me-not! Therefore this was a (pleasant) surprise. Sweet, fresh and natural-sounding. What more can one ask?
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I love roses too, but I was expecting to see a forget-me-not! Therefore this was a (pleasant) surprise. Sweet, fresh and natural-sounding. What more can one ask?
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hi Sallyo. I'm glad you love roses. They bring a smile to those that can see beauty. Happy it bought one to you. :)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
What a wonderful and well thought out way to describe this beautiful flower. The beautiful wording and accompanying artwork fuse together superbly. Even if there wasn't a photo, I could visualize what you are saying. I like this and think that you should do well in the contest. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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What a wonderful and well thought out way to describe this beautiful flower. The beautiful wording and accompanying artwork fuse together superbly. Even if there wasn't a photo, I could visualize what you are saying. I like this and think that you should do well in the contest. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks Jeffrey. I hope I get a little funny money. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The correct syllable count here for your nonet and the sunshine encourages the yellow rose with the help of the dew, a fine write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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The correct syllable count here for your nonet and the sunshine encourages the yellow rose with the help of the dew, a fine write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you Dolly. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow...this one really brings the imagery on (no pic necessary!!) and, not only that, it really helps bring the blood pressure down! So beautiful and so very gentle... :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Wow...this one really brings the imagery on (no pic necessary!!) and, not only that, it really helps bring the blood pressure down! So beautiful and so very gentle... :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I write for your smile, though sometimes my smile becomes a leer. I apologize for that. I am an imperfect specimen of the human race, Yvette. I'm glad you liked this one. :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful image.
-The syllable count is
good, and the imagery
is effective.
-I like the first line, as
it creates a positive mood.
-You also show your
love of roses very well.
-They are breathtakingly beautiful!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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-Beautiful image.
-The syllable count is
good, and the imagery
is effective.
-I like the first line, as
it creates a positive mood.
-You also show your
love of roses very well.
-They are breathtakingly beautiful!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you Pam. I do love roses. :) I'll share this with you.
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You are very welcome, and thanks!
Comment from LisaMay
What a lovely photo and your nonet pays homage nicely to the beauty of the rose. It seems to be a difficult form and yours is done skilfully to fit the syllable count.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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What a lovely photo and your nonet pays homage nicely to the beauty of the rose. It seems to be a difficult form and yours is done skilfully to fit the syllable count.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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LisaMay, the beauty of a rose is in the eye of the beholder. :) I am glad you found this to mirror your beauty.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Yep. This is so pretty!! So well-suited to the subject. Roses. My, my. Roses. There's nothing quite like them, is there??? This was a beautifully designed nonet for the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Yep. This is so pretty!! So well-suited to the subject. Roses. My, my. Roses. There's nothing quite like them, is there??? This was a beautifully designed nonet for the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Robyn, I can see you like roses too. :) I will share this one with you. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I love the vivid imagery of the first two lines, especially the way a breath of sunshine signals the rose will be yellow. Well done with the nonet, and good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I love the vivid imagery of the first two lines, especially the way a breath of sunshine signals the rose will be yellow. Well done with the nonet, and good luck!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you Darlene. A yellow rose is a forget-me-not present. :) I'm glad you like it.
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I thought the color had significance but I confess I'm not terribly up on the meaning of different colors. Thanks for educating me!
Comment from Janetsue
Yellow roses are my favorite and you've definitely done justice to this one with your lovely nonet. The picture is gorgeous and supports your poetry.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Yellow roses are my favorite and you've definitely done justice to this one with your lovely nonet. The picture is gorgeous and supports your poetry.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you Spangle. Yellow roses are my favorite, but I love all my roses. They bring a breathe of fresh air into my heart. I'm glad you liked it. :)
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You're very welcome!
