A tight nonet
a nonet for fun13 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
Tight indeed with almost-rhymes on most of the lines and just the last eez sound at the end. I'm pretty new to nonets but this one fits the description. Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Tight indeed with almost-rhymes on most of the lines and just the last eez sound at the end. I'm pretty new to nonets but this one fits the description. Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you Sallyo It was a bit of fun do have a go they are not too hard Cheers
Comment from Gail Denham
Indeed a tight squeeze - but isn't it fun to try and fit into that form of poetry. I enjoy those - and also the ninette which is upside down from yours. Good poem
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Indeed a tight squeeze - but isn't it fun to try and fit into that form of poetry. I enjoy those - and also the ninette which is upside down from yours. Good poem
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hi Gail Thanks for reading my nonet and sending this review it is indeed a tight squeeze LOL Cheers
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Mystery Writer. All those cupcakes cought my attention. I liked your Nonet about a Nonet. I enjoyed reading it. Writing a poem about a poem is clever.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hi Mystery Writer. All those cupcakes cought my attention. I liked your Nonet about a Nonet. I enjoyed reading it. Writing a poem about a poem is clever.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hi Robert, Thanks very much glad you had a cup cake with me Fun to write Cheers
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You're welcome! Good cupcake.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A nonet about how tight a nonet is and to squeeze all the words into this tight syllable count is tough, but you did it! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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A nonet about how tight a nonet is and to squeeze all the words into this tight syllable count is tough, but you did it! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hi Dolly, Thanks for a look in for my nonet a bit of fun not a serious nonet this time Cheers for your good luck
Comment from Mark D. R.
Only two, please! They are small, so I will take three before you freeze the lot (-;
Your rhyming is spot on.
Glad I tasted your sample today.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Only two, please! They are small, so I will take three before you freeze the lot (-;
Your rhyming is spot on.
Glad I tasted your sample today.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hi Mark, Thank for reading and reviewing my nonet it was meant to be more fun than a serious one there are some great nonets in the bunch Cheers
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet about writing a Nonet in perfect format is not an easy task with many changes of words and looking for similar words that will fit better in the tight space.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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A very well-written Nonet about writing a Nonet in perfect format is not an easy task with many changes of words and looking for similar words that will fit better in the tight space.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hi Sandra, cthanks for reading and I tried to make it fit a tight squeeze LOL Cheers
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I will tell you honestly that I have seen a variation of this theme several times in these contests. (Not trying to be horribly rude, I promise.)
I like everything a lot - until the last three lines. Those KINDA seem like a cop out. (sorry!) The first part is more creative and fun -- can you edit so the last part is, too???
I apologize if I offend you - my hope is to help. It's a subjective thing, so, of course, I won't deduct stars. Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I will tell you honestly that I have seen a variation of this theme several times in these contests. (Not trying to be horribly rude, I promise.)
I like everything a lot - until the last three lines. Those KINDA seem like a cop out. (sorry!) The first part is more creative and fun -- can you edit so the last part is, too???
I apologize if I offend you - my hope is to help. It's a subjective thing, so, of course, I won't deduct stars. Good luck!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your review I know it is a cop out but took me all of 10 minutes to write don?t expect to win either but appreciate your comments will try to revise
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Have revised probably not much better LOL
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No, no. I disagree. I think it is soooo much nicer and more creative and original. It's more clever and more fun. (And it looks like you put more time and thought into it??) Thank you for understanding my thoughts and taking my comments so nicely. I really appreciate that - it always makes me believe I'm talking to someone with the true heart of a WRITER. Have a fab night. (And good luck!)
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Thanks Robyn
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You?re welcome!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written Nonet poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you used. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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This is a very cute and well written Nonet poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you used. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thanks Teri I appreciate your time to review my nonet and thanks for the best wishes
Comment from LisaMay
This is a clever nonet: I like it a lot. You have made something out of not much and crafted it to fit the syllable count perfectly. I love all the pretty cupcakes too!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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This is a clever nonet: I like it a lot. You have made something out of not much and crafted it to fit the syllable count perfectly. I love all the pretty cupcakes too!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hi LisaMay Thanks so much , glad you liked my poem it is fun to think these up . Cup cakes a bonus LOL
Comment from Janetsue
You've done very well with your nonet entry. I think it's a delicious entry, for sure. LOL (I am a big jigsaw fancier and I love the picture...it drew me into your posting right away.) Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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You've done very well with your nonet entry. I think it's a delicious entry, for sure. LOL (I am a big jigsaw fancier and I love the picture...it drew me into your posting right away.) Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Hi Spangle, Many thanks for your review and I am pleased my image drew you in. Your review is much appreciated
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You're very welcome!