He Stayed With Me
nonet writing prompt9 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet about companionship that can make us feel happy and we will do anything to make those happy who are precious to us. Friendship is forever.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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A very well-written Nonet about companionship that can make us feel happy and we will do anything to make those happy who are precious to us. Friendship is forever.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Nike23
This is good. I like how it tells a story of love. Some people might feel like they heard this story before but I am a hopeless romantic and I always believe in love. Good job.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This is good. I like how it tells a story of love. Some people might feel like they heard this story before but I am a hopeless romantic and I always believe in love. Good job.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Dear Nike23, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Playful and simple:) 'It was the night he'd been born
Shared breakfast the next morn" maybe morn should have an apostrophe. I am not going to say anything about the format, still rapping my head around it:) Good luck
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Playful and simple:) 'It was the night he'd been born
Shared breakfast the next morn" maybe morn should have an apostrophe. I am not going to say anything about the format, still rapping my head around it:) Good luck
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Dear Iza, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice photo and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of rhyme and
description about this special visit.
-It flows well from the companionship
to the end with the sunrise and friendship.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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-Nice photo and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of rhyme and
description about this special visit.
-It flows well from the companionship
to the end with the sunrise and friendship.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Dear Pam, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
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You are very welcome, Dove.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful Nonet poem you have penned about a very special night and now a very special friend. You used great words and good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This is a very beautiful Nonet poem you have penned about a very special night and now a very special friend. You used great words and good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your compliments and comments and review. And your best wishes for the contest. Blessings, Donna
Comment from LisaMay
How lovely that you had company. The dinner you cooked would have to be among my favourite foods! Your poem and presentation are colourfully vibrant and full of happiness.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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How lovely that you had company. The dinner you cooked would have to be among my favourite foods! Your poem and presentation are colourfully vibrant and full of happiness.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Dear LisaMay, Thank you for your comments and review. I'm glad the dinner I cooked is one of your favorite foods.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I didn't count syllables, so I can judge that, but I liked your message and your author notes. It's a horrible, horrible thing to be sad and alone. So glad that you had that wonderful, happy moment AND provided one for someone else, too! YAY!
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I didn't count syllables, so I can judge that, but I liked your message and your author notes. It's a horrible, horrible thing to be sad and alone. So glad that you had that wonderful, happy moment AND provided one for someone else, too! YAY!
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Dear Robyn, Thank you for your comments and good luck wishes.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Every human being needs contact with other human beings. So this has a universal theme. I see you followed the form very well. Nice going! Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Every human being needs contact with other human beings. So this has a universal theme. I see you followed the form very well. Nice going! Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Dear CrystieCookie999, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
There is no heartache, he visited you, and you shared breakfast with him, it was a great companionship, you have enjoyed the moments; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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There is no heartache, he visited you, and you shared breakfast with him, it was a great companionship, you have enjoyed the moments; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Dear Alcreator, Thank you for your comments and review.