Comment from Emma 2

Good

Hi..
This is good, and yes at a point in a life, we have all bit our tongue. Hmm not much more to say... So today I will give you Four star's. Keep up the good work. Emma

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019

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Comment from Lance S. Loria

Excellent

Nice obscure word. I've never heard of it previously. Good 7-9-7 syllable count. Per the prompt you kept it clean while discussing foul language. Excellent!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019

Thanks much for the review, Lance!!

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

That was some obscure word you found. I never heard of it, but I guess that's the point of the contest. After reading your notes the poem made a whole lot of sense. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019

Thanks much for the review, Earl!!