Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Ahhhh, yes.... the foods that will trigger a migraine that will last for days...ugh! ;) Just glad I was only reading - lol! :) Thank you for joining in our obscure fun and you be sure to enjoy the rest of your weekend! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019

Thank you for your message and review.

Comment from LaRosa

Excellent

Alright! I think I could use this one with my own mind-play. Move over Ikeda...'ooo, mommy, that's really good!'
Cool. Good luck, I think you had fun with this one. Yes?

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019

Your mommy or Umami. LOL Thank you for your review.

reply by LaRosa on 02-Aug-2019

You're welcome!

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

Fun, funny poem. Fits the contest requirements. I had forgotten entirely what umami was. Unfortunately I have odd allergic reactions to too much MSG, causes headaches. But you did great, good luck in contest!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019

Thank you for your review

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good image,
presentation, and
obscure word.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective rhyme and a
good way to encourage eating
your dinner-"then you can
have some dessert!"
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019

Thank you for your message and review.

reply by Pam (respa) on 30-Jul-2019

You are very welcome.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

LOL! Nice try, but I see spinach and cauliflower on that there plate so umami all you want as I ain't buying it. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2019

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019

LoL. Thank you for your message and review.