Crepuscule
obscure word 7-9-7 poem27 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. You did a great job with the prompt. The art is outstanding and perfect for your well-chosen words. I know what this word means, but many may not. Perhaps you could add a small definition in notes. Good job and tanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. You did a great job with the prompt. The art is outstanding and perfect for your well-chosen words. I know what this word means, but many may not. Perhaps you could add a small definition in notes. Good job and tanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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thank you very much.i have added the meaning in the notes.
Comment from humpwhistle
I'm pretty sure we'd recognize crepuscule as the obscure word--even without the caps. We also call that particular evening sky 'sailor's delight'. Great presentation.
I wish you the best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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I'm pretty sure we'd recognize crepuscule as the obscure word--even without the caps. We also call that particular evening sky 'sailor's delight'. Great presentation.
I wish you the best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Crepuscule, the state in rightly and meaningfully described in words, is put in visualization; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Crepuscule, the state in rightly and meaningfully described in words, is put in visualization; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one
continuous thought.
-The imagery and
personification add to
the description about the word,
especially "red gold."
-Good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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-Nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one
continuous thought.
-The imagery and
personification add to
the description about the word,
especially "red gold."
-Good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from fm wright
Crepuscule is indeed a wonderful word in that it it expresses such beauty as such your other words help create! It is a wonderfully written poem and I wouldn't change one word of it. Also, you have chosen a beautiful picture to go with it and I wish you the very best with this entry!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Crepuscule is indeed a wonderful word in that it it expresses such beauty as such your other words help create! It is a wonderfully written poem and I wouldn't change one word of it. Also, you have chosen a beautiful picture to go with it and I wish you the very best with this entry!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much for these glittering stars and i am quite honoured that you like it.
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 7-9-7 poem about the beautiful sunset that end up inot a sky of red and gold crepuscule. A show of Twilight at the time of dusk.
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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A very well-written 7-9-7 poem about the beautiful sunset that end up inot a sky of red and gold crepuscule. A show of Twilight at the time of dusk.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Mark D. R.
A fine use of an unusual word to fit your verse and illustration! No problem with your caps note, but do increasing your font size. IMHO, it makes for a better FS presentation. Centering lines for your short verse is within your poetic choice.
Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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A fine use of an unusual word to fit your verse and illustration! No problem with your caps note, but do increasing your font size. IMHO, it makes for a better FS presentation. Centering lines for your short verse is within your poetic choice.
Best wishes in the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much. I am not very computer savvy and i type these words straight into the space in the site.
