Seasons
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Changes"Colors of each of the 4
8 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely, very descriptive 3-6-9 poem Trisha. Gorgeous Autumn verse and I love the alliteration of - warmth weakens- beautiful presentation.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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This is a lovely, very descriptive 3-6-9 poem Trisha. Gorgeous Autumn verse and I love the alliteration of - warmth weakens- beautiful presentation.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 13-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
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Cheers, valda! I?m glad you enjoyed the poem. I am honored by the sixth star, I really appreciate your review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, aren't you the lady of wishful thinking these days...! ;) :) Oh, it has hit the 'dead' of summer down here and the heat not only smacks you in the face when you walk out the door, but it just HANGS on you the whole time you're outside! ;):) A wonderful, COLORFUL offering for the contest, Trisha -- love your train of thought in your rhyme today!! Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Well, aren't you the lady of wishful thinking these days...! ;) :) Oh, it has hit the 'dead' of summer down here and the heat not only smacks you in the face when you walk out the door, but it just HANGS on you the whole time you're outside! ;):) A wonderful, COLORFUL offering for the contest, Trisha -- love your train of thought in your rhyme today!! Yvette
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Moving on up to the dark side, thanks for your positive charming review. Hugs, Trisha
We?ve had scary storms, suffocating heat, and witches to magically take the rest of summer away! Ain?t not working hahardy ha
Comment from Rikki66
Good luck in the contest. Another reminder of how time progresses at a faster pace as we age. Seems spring just ended and fall with its ghoulish day is rapidly approaching.
Rikki:)
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Good luck in the contest. Another reminder of how time progresses at a faster pace as we age. Seems spring just ended and fall with its ghoulish day is rapidly approaching.
Rikki:)
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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You have me to blame! Its psychological because I?m contesting into October..Thanks Ricky, think younger
Hugs, Trisha.!
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I'll try.
Rikki:)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver three well constructed and interconnected lines of verse. You carry the Autumn theme end to end splendidly. You may want to rethink the formatting as line four and the word "ghostly" are hard to read due to the font being much too light. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver three well constructed and interconnected lines of verse. You carry the Autumn theme end to end splendidly. You may want to rethink the formatting as line four and the word "ghostly" are hard to read due to the font being much too light. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much! I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like getting the opportunity to read a poem from an accomplished poet.
I like learning how to write the 3-6-9 poem from the perfect form written in your poem. I like the photo for it compliments the colors of the autumn season and Halloween. I like soon we will be experimented with the days, mornings and my favorite ghostly mists.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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I like getting the opportunity to read a poem from an accomplished poet.
I like learning how to write the 3-6-9 poem from the perfect form written in your poem. I like the photo for it compliments the colors of the autumn season and Halloween. I like soon we will be experimented with the days, mornings and my favorite ghostly mists.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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There are many more accomplished than me, so I?m honored by your reviews.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like the line "nature's great paint palette" and "clouds tearful" later on. I like your photo choice, too! I sense some consonance in the ending sounds of "ghost-ly" and "mists." Not sure what to fix. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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I like the line "nature's great paint palette" and "clouds tearful" later on. I like your photo choice, too! I sense some consonance in the ending sounds of "ghost-ly" and "mists." Not sure what to fix. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Patty Palmer
I don't know why I didble, but after we got it loose I decided that it did look bad, leaning toward the skating stuff.
Good luck went with I. God bless!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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I don't know why I didble, but after we got it loose I decided that it did look bad, leaning toward the skating stuff.
Good luck went with I. God bless!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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I?m sorry, I have no idea what you mean, thanks for reviewing
Hugs
Comment from Janetsue
You've successfully created additional interest in your 3-6-9 series of verses with the varied colors offering further support to the title. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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You've successfully created additional interest in your 3-6-9 series of verses with the varied colors offering further support to the title. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Spangle! I appreciate your kind review
Hugs, Trisha