Seasons
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Ocean Life"Colors of each of the 4
7 total reviews
Comment from Rikki66
Good luck in the contest. I miss Jacques Cousteau He was forever bringing the beauty of the sea to television. Imagine his shows in high-def. So beautiful but can be so deadly.
Rikki:)
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
  |
Good luck in the contest. I miss Jacques Cousteau He was forever bringing the beauty of the sea to television. Imagine his shows in high-def. So beautiful but can be so deadly.
Rikki:)
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
-
I used to love his shows too. Thanks for reviewing, Rikki
Hugs, Trisha
-
Welcome.
Rikki:)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Some of the coral we are gifted to see is like living, painted sculptures, isn't it, Trisha?! :) And this is a wonderful contest offering that pays tribute to not only the sculptures but, in its own way, to the sculpture as well!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck ! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
|
Some of the coral we are gifted to see is like living, painted sculptures, isn't it, Trisha?! :) And this is a wonderful contest offering that pays tribute to not only the sculptures but, in its own way, to the sculpture as well!! ;) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck ! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
-
Thanks Yvette, for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from zanya
A lovely sight in the natural world 'beautiful coral' -hopefully we will come to appreciate it a lot more as we realise how endangered it is becoming
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
|
A lovely sight in the natural world 'beautiful coral' -hopefully we will come to appreciate it a lot more as we realise how endangered it is becoming
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
-
I totally agree! Thanks for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mark D. R.
Do like your selected illustration to accompany your 5-7-5, 3-line poem and your text color.
And yes, coral is beautiful, but in some places in our world the hot climate is destroying the same.
Consider changing 'In' to lowercase to agree with your last line. It is your choice to keep 'Colorful' as is.
Best wishes in this contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
|
Do like your selected illustration to accompany your 5-7-5, 3-line poem and your text color.
And yes, coral is beautiful, but in some places in our world the hot climate is destroying the same.
Consider changing 'In' to lowercase to agree with your last line. It is your choice to keep 'Colorful' as is.
Best wishes in this contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
-
Short and sweet, your review enticed better changes to my poem. Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about the colorful life underneath the ocean surface with beautiful coral that is decorated with many shapes and colors.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
|
A very well-written three-line poem about the colorful life underneath the ocean surface with beautiful coral that is decorated with many shapes and colors.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
-
Thank you for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Pleasing 3 line/haiku entry. I am hearing consonance with "colorful," "beautiful," and "coral." There is also consonance with "oceans' " and "gardens." Nice job. Good luck in contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
|
Pleasing 3 line/haiku entry. I am hearing consonance with "colorful," "beautiful," and "coral." There is also consonance with "oceans' " and "gardens." Nice job. Good luck in contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
-
Thank you for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The imagery is poignant and needs no artwork as the words speak for themselves. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
|
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The imagery is poignant and needs no artwork as the words speak for themselves. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2019
-
Thank you for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha